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Postautor: Sekator93 » 09 maja 2010, 20:07

List formalny do artykułu "Why TV is bad for us"
Pisałam go samodzielnie i wiem, ż…e zapewne jest wiele błędów dlatego proszę o pomoc. :)

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writting in connection with the article 'Why TV is bad fot us' in Monday's newspaper. I agree with many thing by the author.
First of all. I totally agree with things that TV encourages us to be lazy. I sad how many people often to squander life. We often watch unnecessary programmes waste precious time. People can go to, a museum, a theatre or go to exhibition instead of watching TV but many persons turn down this idea because they prefer sit on couch and eat. Over passive mode life we get usually obese and we have problems with eyes.
Next, I disagree that TV often gives is a trivial version of the news. I thing this every news is important. Death one human is equally important how disaster many people.
Next, I thing that by TV neglect contact with family because sometimes we prefer watch TV programmes than talk with children.
Finally, I disagree with arguments that TV teaches young people that violence is always the best answer. I consider that every young human during grow up form yourself ang have chance choice.
Yours faithfully,

Karolina Kruk
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