prosze o sprawdzenie;)

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prosze o sprawdzenie;)

Postautor: nom1why5 » 13 cze 2010, 7:04

Napisalam bratu prace ale nie wiem czy dobrze czy bylby ktos na tyle mily i na nia zerknal?;))


Firstly, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Tomasz xxxxx. I am 22 years old and I am from Poland. I have lived in little village called xxxx since eighteen years with my family. Exactly with my parents – Agata and Ryszard- and with one younger sister-Monika. Before I lived in Tuły and Darnowiec.
I am quite high – about 188 cm. I am well built. I have got dark short hair and brown eyes. I usually wear sport’s clothes, because I like to feel comfortable. Generalny, I think that I am hand-some man, but I am not sure if any body else thinks like me. As for personality, I am an optimistic person, who always look forward with hope. Also I am very friendly and nice, that is why I got so many friends. One of my advantage is perceptivity and lambency. Unfortunately I am a bit lazy and not punctually, those features does not help in life. Beside that, I am a responsible, talkative and out going person. I am interested in many sports. When I was sixteen I love to play volleyball. I was in school team and we did very well. Now I prefer to play basketball or soccer. Actually I am in local football team, but we not that good as we want to. One very important part of my life is education. I graduated high school three years ago with good marks. Now I am a student in collage.
It’s difficult to judge myself. I think that I am a good man, but I could be better. Einstein said :” Only a life in the service of others is worth living” I try to fallow this sentence in my life and I think that is a good way to live.
nom1why5
 


Re: prosze o sprawdzenie;)

Postautor: Gość » 13 cze 2010, 21:19

Firstly, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Tomasz xxxxx. I am 22 years old and I am from Poland. I have lived in a little village called xxxx for eighteen years with my family. More precisely, with my parents – Agata and Ryszard- and with one younger sister-Monika. Before I lived in Tuły and Darnowiec.
I am quite tall – about 188 cm - and well built. I have short, dark hair and brown eyes. I usually wear athletic clothes, because I like to feel comfortable. Generally, I think that I am a handsome man, but I am not sure if anybody else thinks the same. As for my personality, I am an optimistic person, who always looks forward with hope. I am also very friendly and nice, that is why I have so many friends. One of my good qualities is perceptivity and lambency. Unfortunately, I am a bit lazy and not punctual -- those characteristics do not help me in life. Besides that, I am a responsible, talkative, and outgoing person. I am interested in many sports. When I was sixteen I loved to play volleyball. I was on my school team and we did very well. Now I prefer to play basketball or soccer. Actually, I am a member of a local soccer team, but we not do as well as we would want to. One very important part of my life is education. I graduated from high school three years ago with good marks. Now I am a student in college.
It’s difficult to judge myself. I think that I am a good man, but I could be better. Einstein once said :” Only a life in the service of others is worth living.” I try to follow this sentence in my life because I think that is a good way to live.
Gość
 




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