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[Mara1989]

‘Awake’ is a thriller which gives viewers rapid heartbeat.
Joby Harold is the director of the film.
This film is about man who is have a large fortune but unfortunately
he struggles with a heart condition.
The main character is Clay (Hayden Christensen) who
is fells in love with Sam (Jessica Alba).
Soon he will get heart operation which he cannot survived.
He gets married in secret the day before operation and then he told mother about it.
When an organ donor is found that Clay’s family was very happy.
Next day, the time has come for operation. Clay is preparing for operation and then he
remains anaesthetize and he should be sleep instead of be fully conscious.
Music create wonderful atmosphere, it is composed by Samuel Sim.
When we watching the movie we do not know what happen next.
In my opinion the movie is showing us incredible look at the life.
In one moment our life can change, people are helplessly in some situation.
They must throw oneself at somebody’s help or mercy.
I recommend this movie because is very interesting and every separate person who watch
it get on to it in another way, but I am sure that all viewers get something out worthy from this movie.

[Peterski]

Ok, I corrected the text to the best ability I have acquired at my advanced English composition classes at the university level. So let` s commence.

‘Awake’ is a thriller which gives viewers rapid heartbeat.
Joby Harold is the director of the film.
This film is about man who has a large fortune but unfortunately
he struggles with a heart condition.
The main character is Clay (Hayden Christensen) who falls in love with Sam (Jessica Alba).
Soon he will get heart operation which he cannot survive.
He gets married secretly the day before the operation and then he tells mother about it.
When an organ donor is found, the Clay’s family is very happy.
Next day, when the time has came for operation. Clay is preparing for operation and then he remains anaesthetized and he should be asleep instead of being fully conscious.
Music creates wonderful atmosphere; it is composed by Samuel Sim.
When we are watching the movie we do not know what happens next.
In my opinion the movie is showing us an incredible look at the life.
Life can change in a blink of an eye, people can find themselves helplessly in some unpredictable circumstances.
They must place themselves at somebody’s help or mercy.
I recommend this movie because it is very interesting and every separate person who watch it get into it in idiosyncratic way, but I am sure that all viewers get something worthy out of this movie.

[monimmi]

Ok, I corrected the text to the best ability I have acquired at my advanced English composition classes at the university level. So let` s commence.

‘Awake’ is a thriller which gives viewers a rapid heartbeat.
Joby Harold is the director of the film.
This film is about a man who has a large fortune but unfortunately
he struggles with a heart condition.
The main character is Clay (Hayden Christensen) who falls in love with Sam (Jessica Alba).
Soon he will get a heart operation which he cannot survive.
He gets married secretly the day before the operation and then he tells his? mother about it.
When an organ donor is found, Clay’s family is very happy.
The next day, the time has came for his operation. Clay is being prepared for the operation but when he is anaesthetized, he remains fully conscious.
The music creates a wonderful atmosphere; it is composed by Samuel Sim.
When we are watching the movie we do not know what will happen next.
In my opinion the movie is showing us an incredible look at life.
Life can change in a blink of an eye, people can find themselves helpless in some unpredictable circumstances.
They must place themselves at somebody’s mercy.
I recommend this movie because it is very interesting and everyone who watches it gets into it in his or her own, unique way , but I am sure that all viewers get something worthy out of this movie.

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