Re: Tekst piosenki - moż ecie rzucić okiem?...
: 28 gru 2005, 18:14
Napisałem ostatnio piosenkę dla mojego zespołu, ale nie jestem pewien, czy jest napisana poprawnie. Moglibyście wychwycić błędy i napisać je poniż
ej? Będę baaardzo wdzięczny... 
THROUGH THE LAKE
1. We set off sailing through a great lake
The weather was nice, wind in our hair
The Boat moved fast crushing clear water
We were free and very, very happy
2. They called us, said they are nearby
We were watched from the hill by them
It must be a really beautiful view!
We wanted to meet with our friends
Suddenly we noticed that the lake is over
And we went into the river
An old man who was fishing on the riverside
Warned us that the river isn't deep enough
We had to go back, but we didn't want to
And then we saw our friends on the shore
3. We moored and then we greeted with them
The sun set, it was dark and little cold
We sat around the campfire, among the trees,
And graves; we talked and sang quietly
4. We are in the old cemetery
The campfire is heating us
And it's light up our faces
Something's move about in a thicket
darkness, fear, graves, trees
2x
leaves, bones, branches, beasts
The night bird is singing
Fire is crackling aloud
Someone's playing on the guitar
We are afraid of one's shadow
We are sitting and dreaming
Cause the dreams comes true
We don't know, what the tme is
And don't care about it.
stars, sparks, moon, sky
2x
smoke, stone, cross, lie
5. We set off sailing early in the next day
The sun sunrised, the weather wasn't nice
It was no wind in our hairs
The boat moved slowly, and we weren't happy
We left behind our friends and the night camp
The lake was in gray and no sails on it
We were bored and tired, so we went to sleep
Our dreams were beautiful, so we slept hard
6. When we woke up, all sky was covered by dark clouds
The wind blowed very strong, our boat jerked hard
7. We are in the middle of the lake
It's raining hard, the storm is comming
We are soaked and scared
Someone must help us!
wet, cold, storm, wind
2x
water, boat, lightning, death
Our boat is all down (przewróciła się)
We are swimming to the shore
God is merciful, we are alive!
Cause we are praying to him
Cause we are praying to him...
THROUGH THE LAKE
1. We set off sailing through a great lake
The weather was nice, wind in our hair
The Boat moved fast crushing clear water
We were free and very, very happy
2. They called us, said they are nearby
We were watched from the hill by them
It must be a really beautiful view!
We wanted to meet with our friends
Suddenly we noticed that the lake is over
And we went into the river
An old man who was fishing on the riverside
Warned us that the river isn't deep enough
We had to go back, but we didn't want to
And then we saw our friends on the shore
3. We moored and then we greeted with them
The sun set, it was dark and little cold
We sat around the campfire, among the trees,
And graves; we talked and sang quietly
4. We are in the old cemetery
The campfire is heating us
And it's light up our faces
Something's move about in a thicket
darkness, fear, graves, trees
2x
leaves, bones, branches, beasts
The night bird is singing
Fire is crackling aloud
Someone's playing on the guitar
We are afraid of one's shadow
We are sitting and dreaming
Cause the dreams comes true
We don't know, what the tme is
And don't care about it.
stars, sparks, moon, sky
2x
smoke, stone, cross, lie
5. We set off sailing early in the next day
The sun sunrised, the weather wasn't nice
It was no wind in our hairs
The boat moved slowly, and we weren't happy
We left behind our friends and the night camp
The lake was in gray and no sails on it
We were bored and tired, so we went to sleep
Our dreams were beautiful, so we slept hard
6. When we woke up, all sky was covered by dark clouds
The wind blowed very strong, our boat jerked hard
7. We are in the middle of the lake
It's raining hard, the storm is comming
We are soaked and scared
Someone must help us!
wet, cold, storm, wind
2x
water, boat, lightning, death
Our boat is all down (przewróciła się)
We are swimming to the shore
God is merciful, we are alive!
Cause we are praying to him
Cause we are praying to him...