Re: Opowiadanko - proszę o sprawdzenie ;)
: 24 wrz 2006, 13:27
Witam 
Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w moim opowiadanku
ślicznie dziekuję
When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent. Our English teacher Mrs. Johnson walked into the classroom. She always set us a lot of homework and because of this, we hadn’t time for anything else. This time we had to write 20 pages long essey about our favourite showbussiness star and she gave us only Saturday and Sunday to do it. Unfortunately nobody wrote it.
While Mrs. Johnson was taking the register we were praying, that she forgot about this task. But no, she remembered. ‘Tom read your homework’ said teacher kindly. Tom looked pale and his hands were shaking. ‘We bought a new dog and it ate my homework’ said boy. No one was laughing. Our hearts were pounding faster and faster. A minute later Monika was answering ‘I want to write about Madonna so I went to her concert. Next day I felt sick’ Tony said that he had a terrible headache and toothache as he had been hospitalised for two days.
Then there was my turn. I didn’t know what to say so I decided pretend to faint. While I was fainting I noticed a chair nearby. But it was too late. I hit my head on it. This broke silent in classroom.
Within seconds I was in school nurse’s room. Next day I had big, purple and very painful bruise on my head. It didn’t help my scrimshanked. Everybody in the class got the worst marks. Now we have even more homework then before and we have to work much harder. But, we have learnt, lying isn’t a good solution.
i jak?
pozdrawiam
Matka Chrzestna
Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w moim opowiadanku
ślicznie dziekuję
When the classroom door opened, everybody went silent. Our English teacher Mrs. Johnson walked into the classroom. She always set us a lot of homework and because of this, we hadn’t time for anything else. This time we had to write 20 pages long essey about our favourite showbussiness star and she gave us only Saturday and Sunday to do it. Unfortunately nobody wrote it.
While Mrs. Johnson was taking the register we were praying, that she forgot about this task. But no, she remembered. ‘Tom read your homework’ said teacher kindly. Tom looked pale and his hands were shaking. ‘We bought a new dog and it ate my homework’ said boy. No one was laughing. Our hearts were pounding faster and faster. A minute later Monika was answering ‘I want to write about Madonna so I went to her concert. Next day I felt sick’ Tony said that he had a terrible headache and toothache as he had been hospitalised for two days.
Then there was my turn. I didn’t know what to say so I decided pretend to faint. While I was fainting I noticed a chair nearby. But it was too late. I hit my head on it. This broke silent in classroom.
Within seconds I was in school nurse’s room. Next day I had big, purple and very painful bruise on my head. It didn’t help my scrimshanked. Everybody in the class got the worst marks. Now we have even more homework then before and we have to work much harder. But, we have learnt, lying isn’t a good solution.
i jak?
pozdrawiam
Matka Chrzestna