Re: proszę o sprawdzenie - rozprawka
: 01 lis 2006, 20:15
Witam
Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w mojej rozprawce
na temat zalet i wad robienia zakupów w hipermarketach
z góry ślicznie dziękuje
pozdrawiam
Nowadays, wandering around the hypermarkets is becoming a way of spending free time. Instead of, going to the park, cinema or theatre families go to supermarkets. Although, doing shopping in these places has a lot of advantages there are also disadvantages.
Doubtlessly in hypermarkets you can find everything you want – clothes, food, household equipment, and other goods. So, when you are very busy, visiting this kind of shop may save your precious time. In addition, if you like reading labels and considering which product is more worth buying you can do it much easier in hypermarkets. Besides, people have more opportunity to find cheap original things because there are a lot of reductions and sales.
On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can buy things, which you do not need and do not want to but you buy them under the influence of the moment. Another problem is the noise. Often, Hypermarkets are crowded and loud places. As a result, when people have to queue for a long tome or look for a parking space it makes them very stressed and annoyed, Furthermore, in small shops you can talk to a shop assistant, he may give you advice about specific products and share his experience with you. In supermarkets you do not have this possibility.
In conclusion, doing shopping in hypermarkets has many pros and cons. It seems that the decision what that means to different people depends on personal point of view and lifestyle. The choice of whether you do your shopping in hypermarkets always remains with you
dzięki
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Matka Chrzestna
Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w mojej rozprawce
na temat zalet i wad robienia zakupów w hipermarketach
z góry ślicznie dziękuje
pozdrawiam
Nowadays, wandering around the hypermarkets is becoming a way of spending free time. Instead of, going to the park, cinema or theatre families go to supermarkets. Although, doing shopping in these places has a lot of advantages there are also disadvantages.
Doubtlessly in hypermarkets you can find everything you want – clothes, food, household equipment, and other goods. So, when you are very busy, visiting this kind of shop may save your precious time. In addition, if you like reading labels and considering which product is more worth buying you can do it much easier in hypermarkets. Besides, people have more opportunity to find cheap original things because there are a lot of reductions and sales.
On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages. For instance, you can buy things, which you do not need and do not want to but you buy them under the influence of the moment. Another problem is the noise. Often, Hypermarkets are crowded and loud places. As a result, when people have to queue for a long tome or look for a parking space it makes them very stressed and annoyed, Furthermore, in small shops you can talk to a shop assistant, he may give you advice about specific products and share his experience with you. In supermarkets you do not have this possibility.
In conclusion, doing shopping in hypermarkets has many pros and cons. It seems that the decision what that means to different people depends on personal point of view and lifestyle. The choice of whether you do your shopping in hypermarkets always remains with you
dzięki
pozdrawiam
Matka Chrzestna