Re: for and against essay
: 02 gru 2006, 15:54
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Could you check up on my "for and against essey" and correct mistakes?
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Topic "positive and negative aspects of technological development"
Scientists in our world are still developing new technology. However, there are positive and negative sides of this phenomenon. Do we know some of them? I will try to show and explain some more important aspects of this issue.
There is no denying that technological development and inventions make live easier. For example, expansion of different ways of transport cause that people can translocate faster. What is more, information transfers become easier. Nowadays, if we want to deliver a message for someone we can sand an SMS or make a phone call. In addition, technological development supplies an entertainment for us. Watching DVD movies, playing computer games or surfing the Internet are relaxing and calming for majority people.
On the other hand, technological development makes that people isolate from each other, they spend time alone at their house, communicate with friends only through mobile phone or message communicators it dehumanize them. Furthermore, different experiments can lead to worldwide disaster. Some new types biological or chemical weapon can be discovered and used. Another problem is felling forests to get a space for factories and highways. It is serious environmental problem, because a lot of animals and plants are threatened and our climate is getting warmer.
In conclusion, technological development has a positive and a negative aspects. I think that bulk of the population wants further progress because they would like to be happy, pleasant and life comfortable.
Cheers
Regards
GodMother 8)
Could you check up on my "for and against essey" and correct mistakes?
I will be very grateful for all help
Thanks a bunch !
Topic "positive and negative aspects of technological development"
Scientists in our world are still developing new technology. However, there are positive and negative sides of this phenomenon. Do we know some of them? I will try to show and explain some more important aspects of this issue.
There is no denying that technological development and inventions make live easier. For example, expansion of different ways of transport cause that people can translocate faster. What is more, information transfers become easier. Nowadays, if we want to deliver a message for someone we can sand an SMS or make a phone call. In addition, technological development supplies an entertainment for us. Watching DVD movies, playing computer games or surfing the Internet are relaxing and calming for majority people.
On the other hand, technological development makes that people isolate from each other, they spend time alone at their house, communicate with friends only through mobile phone or message communicators it dehumanize them. Furthermore, different experiments can lead to worldwide disaster. Some new types biological or chemical weapon can be discovered and used. Another problem is felling forests to get a space for factories and highways. It is serious environmental problem, because a lot of animals and plants are threatened and our climate is getting warmer.
In conclusion, technological development has a positive and a negative aspects. I think that bulk of the population wants further progress because they would like to be happy, pleasant and life comfortable.
Cheers
Regards
GodMother 8)