Re: czy sprawdziłby mi ktoś to opowiadanie?
: 12 gru 2006, 22:47
"Who can this man be?" Sheila wondered as she looked at the stranger standing at the fron door.Suddenly she remmbered that this man is her daughter's father.Sheila was surprised.She hasn't seen him since her daugter was born.Why did he cpme back?Nevertheless he didn't want to be her father.Unexpectedly Sheila let him come in.
"I'm sorry...Please, forgive me..." whispered a man.Sheila was holding back the tears.She didn't know what she should doing.At one time she loved him very much but he harmed her and child.She was bringing up daugter alone.But now he turn up and Sheila was belwidered.While they was looking at each other, in the room turned up a small girl."Mummy, who is this man?" girl asked and cuddled up to Sheila."It's your...father".When she said this words, she burst into tears.
musze jeszcze napisac zakonczenie ale na razie nie mam weny:)prosze o sprawdzenie tego co na razie stworzylam.z gory dziekuję
"I'm sorry...Please, forgive me..." whispered a man.Sheila was holding back the tears.She didn't know what she should doing.At one time she loved him very much but he harmed her and child.She was bringing up daugter alone.But now he turn up and Sheila was belwidered.While they was looking at each other, in the room turned up a small girl."Mummy, who is this man?" girl asked and cuddled up to Sheila."It's your...father".When she said this words, she burst into tears.
musze jeszcze napisac zakonczenie ale na razie nie mam weny:)prosze o sprawdzenie tego co na razie stworzylam.z gory dziekuję