Re: proszę o sprawdzenie mojej rozprawki
: 06 sty 2007, 21:59
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proszę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy i poprawienie błędów
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Nowadays a lot of animals live in zoos. Is it right or wrong to keep them there. I will thy to show some pros and cons of this phenomenon.
There is no denying that zoos have number of advantages. First of all, zoos have special programmes to breed endangered spaces. Thanks that people, especially children, can see live threatened beautiful exotic animals. Secondly beasts have good living conditions in zoos. They do not starve because they have plenty of food and water, specially trained vets take care of them and protection from poachers and hunters is assured. For that reason animals live longer than in the wild. What is more, the living conditions in zoos are improving. Beasts live as close to the natural habitat as possible. For instance, water and other natural barriers are used to separate animals from each other and from the visitors.
On the other hand, animals are forced to live in an unnatural environment. There is not enough living space in zoos. It causes that, bests are often unhappy and restless. It is also true that, some animals do not breed in zoos. Furthermore, they all depend on people and they can not do things in their natural way. For example hunt or chase a prey. Moreover, the worst thing is that animals living in zoos can never be released into the wild because they would not survive.
In conclusion, it seems that keeping wild animals in zoos have as many pros as cons. The decision what it means for people depends on their personal choice.
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pozdrawiam
Matka Chrzestna 8)
proszę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy
i poprawienie błędówdzięki za pomoc
Nowadays a lot of animals live in zoos. Is it right or wrong to keep them there. I will thy to show some pros and cons of this phenomenon.
There is no denying that zoos have number of advantages. First of all, zoos have special programmes to breed endangered spaces. Thanks that people, especially children, can see live threatened beautiful exotic animals. Secondly beasts have good living conditions in zoos. They do not starve because they have plenty of food and water, specially trained vets take care of them and protection from poachers and hunters is assured. For that reason animals live longer than in the wild. What is more, the living conditions in zoos are improving. Beasts live as close to the natural habitat as possible. For instance, water and other natural barriers are used to separate animals from each other and from the visitors.
On the other hand, animals are forced to live in an unnatural environment. There is not enough living space in zoos. It causes that, bests are often unhappy and restless. It is also true that, some animals do not breed in zoos. Furthermore, they all depend on people and they can not do things in their natural way. For example hunt or chase a prey. Moreover, the worst thing is that animals living in zoos can never be released into the wild because they would not survive.
In conclusion, it seems that keeping wild animals in zoos have as many pros as cons. The decision what it means for people depends on their personal choice.
dzięki za pomoc:)
pozdrawiam
Matka Chrzestna 8)