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Nowadays Internet is one of many ways to making new friends. But is it well or wrong to do it. I will try to show some for and against of this phenomenon.

There is no denying that on Internet you can meet very many people because there are always some lonely people, who want to talk about different things. What is more, Internet is a place where you can easy find those with similar hobbies and you can learn from them something inspiring about your interests. In addition, you can talk to others whenever you want to, and you can learn a lot about other cultures and nations. Moreover, sometimes you can share very intimate details, because in fact you can stay anonymous and you will not meet people from Internet in real space.

But there are also some disadvantages. First of all, what some write about themselves may be untrue and if you believe for them you can feel very disgruntled and disappointed when you find out the truth. Secondly, it is not true communication because there is lack of face to face contact and you can not make out your interlocutor emotions. Another problem is that friends making by Internet do not really interested in your problems for that reason it is hardly ever long lasting friendship.

In conclusion, it seems that it depends on personal choice to make new friends by Internet or not and it is your own decision if you believe that it is a good mode of making new inside track.

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Nowadays the Internet is one of many ways to make new friends. But is it well or wrong to do it? I will try to show some advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.

There is no doubt that you can meet a lot of people on the Internet because there are always some lonely people who want to talk about different things. What is more, Internet is a place where you can easy find those with similar hobbies and you can learn from them something inspiring about your interests. In addition, you can talk to the others whenever you want , and you can learn a lot about other cultures and nations. Moreover, sometimes you can share very intimate details, because in fact you can stay anonymous and you will not meet people from Internet in reality.

But there are also some disadvantages. First of all, what some write about themselves may be untrue and if you believe them you can feel very disgruntled and disappointed when you find out the truth. Secondly, it is not true communication because there is a lack of face to face contact and you can not make out your interlocutor emotions. Another problem is that friends made by Internet aren't really interested in your problems. Because of this, it is hardly ever long lasting friendship.

In conclusion, it seems that it depends on personal choice to make new friends by Internet or not and it is your own decision if you believe that it is a good mode of making new inside track.

Nowadays the internet is one of many ways to make new friends. But is it right or wrong to do it? I will try to show some arguments for and against this phenomenon.*

There is no denying that on the internet you can meet very many people because there are always some lonely people who want to talk about different things. What is more, the internet is a place where you can easily find those with similar hobbies and you can learn from them something inspiring about your interests. In addition, you can talk to others whenever you want to, and you can learn a lot about other cultures and nations. Moreover, sometimes you can share very intimate details, because you can stay anonymous and you will not meet people from the internet in real space. (albo in person)

But there are also some disadvantages. First of all, what some write about themselves may be untrue and if you believe them you can feel very disgruntled and disappointed when you find out the truth. Secondly, it is not true communication because there is a lack of face-to-face** contact and you cannot make out the other person's emotions. Another problem is that friends made through the internet are not really interested in your problems, and for that reason it is hardly ever a long lasting friendship.

In conclusion, it seems that it depends on personal choice whether you make new friends through the internet or not and it is your own decision if you believe that it is a good mode of making new friends.*** (albo of finding new friendships)

*albo lepiej "advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon" jak napisano w pierwszej odpowiedzi.
**mysle, ze powinny byc myslniki gdy face-to-face sie uzywa jako przymiotnik.
***'inside track' to znaczy 'pozycja przewagi w konkurencji.'

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jesli mozna to chcialabym poprawic troche Krzysztofa, (choc zrobil very good job

Nowadays the internet is one of many ways to make new friends. But is it right or wrong to do it? I will try to show some arguments for and against this phenomenon.*

There is no denying that on the internet you can meet (very - niepowinno tu byc) many people because there are always loners out there who want to talk to someone about different things. What's more, the internet is a place where you can easily find those with similar hobbies and you can learn from them something inspiring/new about your interests. In addition, you can talk to others whenever you want to, and you can learn a lot about other cultures and nations. Moreover, sometimes you can share very intimate details, because you can stay anonymous and you will not meet people from the internet in real space - space sie nie uzywa mozna dac "life" ale najlepiej tak jak nastepna sugestja. (albo in person)

But there are also some disadvantages. First of all, what some write about themselves may be untrue/not be true and if you believe them you can feel very disgruntled and disappointed when you find out the truth. Secondly, it is not true communication because there is a lack of face-to-face** contact and you cannot make out the other person's emotions. Another problem is that friends made through the internet are not really interested in your problems, and for that reason it is hardly ever a long lasting friendship.

In conclusion, it seems that it depends on personal choice whether you make new friends through the internet or not and it is your own decision if you believe that it is a good mode/way of making new friends.*** (albo of finding new friendships)

hi Colibri,
thanks for the pointers. Looks like you know English fairly well. You're right about real space: people hardly ever use the term. Of course, it could be used to emphasize the difference between cyberspace and real space, but other expressions are a lot more common. Real space actually seems to be used mainly for math, so your suggestion (real life) is better in this context.
As for 'very many'... well, it is in fact quite correct to say "very many." 'Many' is 'wiele' in Polish, and 'very many' is 'bardzo wiele.' Naturally, you can't always translate things literally, but this time it works out. Similarly, it's also correct to say "very much." People are likely to use one of several other expressions such as "a great deal of" rather than "very many," and the latter may sound somewhat more formal, but it can nonetheless be used in the above text without a problem. Since the author wrote it that way, I left it the way it was. Thanks again for your input.

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