Re: Prośba o poprawienie ewentualnych błędów w tekście
: 04 maja 2007, 12:31
Witam.
Napisałem pewien tekst i bardzo prosiłbym o poprawienie w nim błędów. Z góry dziękuję.
Life in 1900 was very difficult. For example, for all this time people didn't have the Internet, CDs, microwaves. People didn't have even mobile phones what for us is a normal thing. They had very restricted rules. The kids was sent to bed at 8.p.m. every night. Girls didn't stay at home if they were old enough to find job as a maid. The most of houses were covered in a layer of dust. It was very awful. There wasn't new things which we are using now, for example, shampoo. Conditions were really hard. But life in 1900 had advantages too. Above all, people were wiser. There wasn't as advanced technology, therefore people had time for learning. The kids communicate better with parents. There wasn't even as big unemployment as we are having now. I think life in the past though had disadvantages, was very interesting. People were simply better.
Napisałem pewien tekst i bardzo prosiłbym o poprawienie w nim błędów. Z góry dziękuję.
Life in 1900 was very difficult. For example, for all this time people didn't have the Internet, CDs, microwaves. People didn't have even mobile phones what for us is a normal thing. They had very restricted rules. The kids was sent to bed at 8.p.m. every night. Girls didn't stay at home if they were old enough to find job as a maid. The most of houses were covered in a layer of dust. It was very awful. There wasn't new things which we are using now, for example, shampoo. Conditions were really hard. But life in 1900 had advantages too. Above all, people were wiser. There wasn't as advanced technology, therefore people had time for learning. The kids communicate better with parents. There wasn't even as big unemployment as we are having now. I think life in the past though had disadvantages, was very interesting. People were simply better.