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: 31 gru 2007, 8:56
autor: xena123
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Hi Ann,
In the begining of my letter I want to greeting you and thank you for your last letter.
Listen, did I tell you about my job? I worked as waiter in McDonalds. I earned a lot of money and I was independent. That was great, but this job is very hard. I didn`t have free time and I didn`t do my homework. I had a bad marks and I and my mother, we made a decision. I had to change a job.
My boyfriend`s father has an estate agency and I work two hours after my lessons here. I have to make a coffee for my boss and I draw up a documents.
I meet very interesting person here. Her names is magda and I like to hear her, because she always narrates an interesting story.
Recently I have changed my email. You can send me emails: jjj@wp.uk
I hope to hear from you soon.
Bye, XYZ

Re: poprawność tekstu

: 02 mar 2008, 23:11
autor: xeo
AT the beginning
want to GREET you
worked as A waiter
that job WAS very hard (bo już… tam nie pracujesz)
draw up documents (bez przedimka)
very interesting PEOPLE
ONE OF THEM IS MAGDA AND I LIKE TO LISTEN TO HER
TELLS INTERESTING STORIES
Recently, I have chaged my e-mail ADDRESS to jjj@wp.uk
Bye,
XYZ

to zdanie "I had a bad marks and I and my mother, we made a decision. I had to change a job" zmieniłbym na "I started getting bad marks that is why I and my mother decided that I should....."

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: 20 gru 2019, 7:31
autor: volord2

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