Proszę o sprawdzenie błędów
: 30 sty 2008, 19:59
Witam.
Miałem do napisania list, w którym wybieram z pośród 3 wakacji jedną ofertę , którą chciałbym wygrac i dlaczego.
Oto list:
Dear Agency
I would like to go on holiday number two – Tropical Safari.
I never had been on holiday like that. I never had been in foreign continent before.
Africa is my favorite continent. I always dreamed about travel to Africa. In Africa live my favorite animal – giraffe . I always wanted to see them on freedom, and see lake Naruki where live millions of pink flamingos. My cousin Jacob had been two times in Africa and he said me “Don! You must see that continent ! It’s amazing place !” But I said “ My parents haven’t money and I can’t buy ticket to Africa and fly with you.” So, when I saw poster saying “Win Travel to Africa” I wrote this letter immediately . I'm 17 and I never had see others country and continents. I’m sadness because my friends on this holiday going to United Kingdom, England , but I can’t because I haven’t enough money. I don’t want on this holiday stay in home again . If I win , this travel will change my life. In Africa , my languages will be better than now. At last, my holiday can by better than ever in my life!
What else can I do to win this travel?
I can only wait on postman which bring me letter from your agency.
With best hope.
Donald Harris
Byłbym bardzo wdzięczny za skorygowanie błędów do jutra rano.
Pozdrawiam
Miałem do napisania list, w którym wybieram z pośród 3 wakacji jedną ofertę , którą chciałbym wygrac i dlaczego.
Oto list:
Dear Agency
I would like to go on holiday number two – Tropical Safari.
I never had been on holiday like that. I never had been in foreign continent before.
Africa is my favorite continent. I always dreamed about travel to Africa. In Africa live my favorite animal – giraffe . I always wanted to see them on freedom, and see lake Naruki where live millions of pink flamingos. My cousin Jacob had been two times in Africa and he said me “Don! You must see that continent ! It’s amazing place !” But I said “ My parents haven’t money and I can’t buy ticket to Africa and fly with you.” So, when I saw poster saying “Win Travel to Africa” I wrote this letter immediately . I'm 17 and I never had see others country and continents. I’m sadness because my friends on this holiday going to United Kingdom, England , but I can’t because I haven’t enough money. I don’t want on this holiday stay in home again . If I win , this travel will change my life. In Africa , my languages will be better than now. At last, my holiday can by better than ever in my life!
What else can I do to win this travel?
I can only wait on postman which bring me letter from your agency.
With best hope.
Donald Harris
Byłbym bardzo wdzięczny za skorygowanie błędów do jutra rano.
Pozdrawiam
