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I would like took about teenagers
- A lot of teenagers are susceptide to influence. Ewerybody can be cool and fashionable. They have many problems with our appearance. A lot of girls lose weight because can be beautifull. Plenty of teenagers use drags, smoke and drink alcochol, the like dangerous.
- The have a lot of any problems: treubles with girfriend or boyfriend; we don't understant our parents and parents don't understand us
- We must be mature very fast, we must alone decide about our life and future

+ They needn't work and worry about living familly
+ In this age bloossom their life towarzyskie
+ They have a lot of free time on entertaiment and hobby. We may to spend this time with ours friend
+ They may to stupid things however anybody don't be wonder
+ Is peace ard we can do what we wont
+ We can get to know a lot of new things
+ Everybody have a mobil phone
+ We have many chance if we have some passion we can do it
+ We can earn money in accasional work

Jeśli praca miała być w formie rozprawki, to niestety, ale troszkę nie wyszło... Natomiast jeśli należ…ało jedynie wymienić plusy i minusy w punktach, forma jest jak najbardziej poprawna. Korekty tekstu poniż…ej.

I would like TO TALK about teenagers:
- A lot of teenagers are SUSCEPTIBLE to influence. EVERYBODY WANTS TO be TRENDY and fashionable. TEENAGERS PAY A LOT OF ATTENTION TO THEIR APPREARANCE. A lot of girls TRY TO lose weight TO be MORE BEAUTIFUL. Plenty of teenagers use drags, smoke and drink ALCOHOL, THEY like DANGER.
- The have MANY problems: TROUBLES with A girfriend or A boyfriend; we don't UNDERSTAND our parents and parents don't understand us
- We HAVE TO mature very fast, we HAVE TO MAKE DECISIONS about our LIVES and future.

+ They DO NOT HAVE TO work and worry about LIVING COSTS.
+ In this age THEIR SOCIAL LIFE DEVELOP
+ They have a lot of free time FOR ENTERTAINMENT and HOBBIES. We can spend this time with OUR FRIENDS.
+ They CAN DO SILLY things AND NOBODY WILL NOTICE IT [tutaj to już… troszkę przesada :-P ]
+ We can LEARN a lot of new things
+ EVERYONE HAS a MOBILE phone
+ We HAVE MANY OPPORTUNITIES TO IMPROVE OUR SKILLS
+ We can earn money in SEASONAL JOBS.

/by AdamK/

Super, wielkie dzięki naprawdę mi pomogłeś
Nie, to nie miała być rozprawka ot tak plusy i minusy mieliśmy przygotować. Naprawdę pomogłeś mi jeszcze raz dzięki

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