Plusy i minusy bycia nastolatkiem- proszę sprawdźcie
: 12 mar 2008, 19:48
Jestem bardzo kiepska z angielskiego, byłabym wdzięczna za mała korektę
I would like took about teenagers
- A lot of teenagers are susceptide to influence. Ewerybody can be cool and fashionable. They have many problems with our appearance. A lot of girls lose weight because can be beautifull. Plenty of teenagers use drags, smoke and drink alcochol, the like dangerous.
- The have a lot of any problems: treubles with girfriend or boyfriend; we don't understant our parents and parents don't understand us
- We must be mature very fast, we must alone decide about our life and future
+ They needn't work and worry about living familly
+ In this age bloossom their life towarzyskie
+ They have a lot of free time on entertaiment and hobby. We may to spend this time with ours friend
+ They may to stupid things however anybody don't be wonder
+ Is peace ard we can do what we wont
+ We can get to know a lot of new things
+ Everybody have a mobil phone
+ We have many chance if we have some passion we can do it
+ We can earn money in accasional work
I would like took about teenagers
- A lot of teenagers are susceptide to influence. Ewerybody can be cool and fashionable. They have many problems with our appearance. A lot of girls lose weight because can be beautifull. Plenty of teenagers use drags, smoke and drink alcochol, the like dangerous.
- The have a lot of any problems: treubles with girfriend or boyfriend; we don't understant our parents and parents don't understand us
- We must be mature very fast, we must alone decide about our life and future
+ They needn't work and worry about living familly
+ In this age bloossom their life towarzyskie
+ They have a lot of free time on entertaiment and hobby. We may to spend this time with ours friend
+ They may to stupid things however anybody don't be wonder
+ Is peace ard we can do what we wont
+ We can get to know a lot of new things
+ Everybody have a mobil phone
+ We have many chance if we have some passion we can do it
+ We can earn money in accasional work