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Prosze o napisanie co moge w niej zmienic i co jest źle..





First month of my holidays I spend on my town. With my friends I walked on beaches and promenade.
Next I started practice with children on the swimming pool in Międzyzdroje and Ahlbeck.
When i was on the Międzyzdroje i saw a Live a group ''smoki" go out
the hotel BIELIK.
In August I was with my family in Łomż…a. Also
I was in the museum of nature in drozdowo.
I have foto with bear , elk and Birds .
When I come back to home I with my friend smash tent on my garden.
The best for me in the summer was watching sunsets it looks wonderful.

ja bym to napisal nieco inaczej aczkolwiek tez niejestem alfa i omega i mam prawo poleniac bledy.
First month of my holiday I spent in my town it was very interesting time for me. I was walking on beach and promenade with my friends. After that I started to practice in the swimming pool with children in Medzyzdroje and Ahlbeck.
When I was in Miedzyzdroje I saw a Live Group called ,,smoki"
outside the hotel Bielik.
In August I went to Łomza with my family. Nearthere I visited museum of nature. I taked photo with bear, elk and Birds. When I came back to home
I smashed tent in my garden with my friends. The best thing for me in the summer were watching sunsets, they were wonderful.

Musisz sobie poustawiac akapity itd nie pamietam jak to bylo ale chyba 4 akapity powinny byc wstep, rozpoczecie, (niepamietam) , zakonczenie. musisz gdzies to sprawdzic aha I oczywiscie prosze kogos lepszego o ocene tej pracy ktora ja przynajmniej sprobowalem poprawic (mile widziane uwagi).

The first month of my holiday I spent in my town. This time was very interesting for me. I was walking on beach and promenade with my friends almost every day. After that I started to practice in the swimming pool with children in Medzyzdroje and Ahlbeck.
When I was in Miedzyzdroje I saw a Live Group called ,,Smoki"
outside the hotel Bielik.
In August I went to Łomza with my family. Near there I visited museum of nature. I taked photo with bear, elk and birds. When I came back home I smashed a tent in my garden with my friends. The best thing for me in this summer were watching sunsets, which were extremely fascinating.

I spent the first month of holidays in my town. That was a very interesting time for me. I walked on the beach and promenade with my friends. After that I started to practice swimming in the swimming pool with the/other children (nie wiem, czy chodzi o "moje dzieci" czy "inne dzieci", w pierwszym przypadku dajesz the, a w drugim other, natomiast same "dzieci" brzmią podejrzanie) in Międzyzdroje and Ahlbeck. When I was in Międzyzdroje, I saw a band called "Smoki" playing live outside the Bielik hotel. In August I went to Łomż…a with my family. I visited a neighbouring museum of nature. I took photos of the bear, elk and birds. When I came back home I erected a tent in my garden with my friends. The best things about this summer was watching sunsets, which was extremely fascinating.

"SMASHED A TENT" jest BOSKIE, ale niestety niepoprawne

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