Sprawdzenie wypowiedzi pisemnej - list.
: 26 wrz 2008, 16:45
Bardzo prosiłabym o sprawdzenie głównie chodzi o gramatykę i poprawnośc zwrotów w liście.
Dear Anna and John,
How are you? I’m fine. I’m writing to you, because I mean about speech, which I was.
Speech was a sensible diet, healthy lifestyle. My mother is trainer, because she unfould.
Lectures progressed in mother’s fitness club “KEEP FIT” on 1st of September.
My mother was talking about do opportunely regular exercise in order to stay your fit and if somebody don’t lack energy he should get enough sleep. The most in advices are eat as much low-fat food and give-up smoking, because cigarettes shortens life and are harmful for our health.
I’ll have to think about it. However I think, that advices my mother are very important. I’ll eat as much low-fat food and take up sport such as swimming. I’ll care my health and my family.
Write soon,
XYZ
Dear Anna and John,
How are you? I’m fine. I’m writing to you, because I mean about speech, which I was.
Speech was a sensible diet, healthy lifestyle. My mother is trainer, because she unfould.
Lectures progressed in mother’s fitness club “KEEP FIT” on 1st of September.
My mother was talking about do opportunely regular exercise in order to stay your fit and if somebody don’t lack energy he should get enough sleep. The most in advices are eat as much low-fat food and give-up smoking, because cigarettes shortens life and are harmful for our health.
I’ll have to think about it. However I think, that advices my mother are very important. I’ll eat as much low-fat food and take up sport such as swimming. I’ll care my health and my family.
Write soon,
XYZ