Proszę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy.
: 04 paź 2008, 15:38
temat "moj dom to moja twierdza". jestem słaba z angielskiego więc zdaję sobie sprawe, ż
e mogą być tu straszne błędy. dlatego proszę o pomoc.
A lot of people say "my home is my castle". Every being have place, where they may feel safe. People have hauses - places, where live they with their family. Place, where we grow up.
Nobody likes when someone strange to enter in our house no invited, therefore we protect uor house from alien. To do that, we use window bars, dead bolts and other safety device. Thanks to that, we believe that we should be able to control what happens in our own home. All safety devices are like moat or tall and thick wall in castle. We as masters of the our house are like monarch in the castle. Everyone should feel safe in home. There we have a lot of love, tolerance, full of warmth and we can be oneself. When we feel ill, we may hide from whole world in our home.
Home is a place, where we should go, when we feel danger or sorrow. For us, it is the most important space in the world. So everyone should care for our home, our castle.
i tyle. proszę bardzo o pomoc.
A lot of people say "my home is my castle". Every being have place, where they may feel safe. People have hauses - places, where live they with their family. Place, where we grow up.
Nobody likes when someone strange to enter in our house no invited, therefore we protect uor house from alien. To do that, we use window bars, dead bolts and other safety device. Thanks to that, we believe that we should be able to control what happens in our own home. All safety devices are like moat or tall and thick wall in castle. We as masters of the our house are like monarch in the castle. Everyone should feel safe in home. There we have a lot of love, tolerance, full of warmth and we can be oneself. When we feel ill, we may hide from whole world in our home.
Home is a place, where we should go, when we feel danger or sorrow. For us, it is the most important space in the world. So everyone should care for our home, our castle.
i tyle. proszę bardzo o pomoc.
