Proszę o sprawdzenie rozprawki.
: 12 lis 2008, 19:55
To moja rozprawka na temat: "Dobre i złe strony bycia nastolatkiem".
Prosił bym o sprawdzenie
Z góry dzięki
Some people say, at the end of their life that it would be great to be young again. Sometimes, they think they could avoid their mistakes. Unfortunately at the beginning of our life, we are teenager and we can make many stupid things witch we can regret in whole later life.
Firstly youth is a time when you can decide about your future life. You can choose way for your life and it can be good or bad. Many people say that it is very good , but young people sometimes do not know what to choose and what is evil - that's why they often take drugs and abuse alcohol.
Secondly teenagers have often very receptive brain, so they need less time to acquire a knowledge. They can also work to develop and improve their's brain.
Young people have to learn a lot - if they want to have a good job in their's future. They stay about 8 hours at the school and they must also learn a lot at home.
Finally when you are young generally you live with parents so you do not have to carry about many things. You often get pocket money and you can buy something for yourself but you have to obey adults and you are financially dependent on them.
All in all every person was, or will be a teenager and he will see what is like. It has many good and bad sides. It is very big responsibility to decide about your future life when you are teenager.
Prosił bym o sprawdzenie
Z góry dzięki Some people say, at the end of their life that it would be great to be young again. Sometimes, they think they could avoid their mistakes. Unfortunately at the beginning of our life, we are teenager and we can make many stupid things witch we can regret in whole later life.
Firstly youth is a time when you can decide about your future life. You can choose way for your life and it can be good or bad. Many people say that it is very good , but young people sometimes do not know what to choose and what is evil - that's why they often take drugs and abuse alcohol.
Secondly teenagers have often very receptive brain, so they need less time to acquire a knowledge. They can also work to develop and improve their's brain.
Young people have to learn a lot - if they want to have a good job in their's future. They stay about 8 hours at the school and they must also learn a lot at home.
Finally when you are young generally you live with parents so you do not have to carry about many things. You often get pocket money and you can buy something for yourself but you have to obey adults and you are financially dependent on them.
All in all every person was, or will be a teenager and he will see what is like. It has many good and bad sides. It is very big responsibility to decide about your future life when you are teenager.
