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: 07 lut 2009, 19:35
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Robbery is one o the most popular crimes. The police estimate that robbers commit about 45% criminal offences. Recently thiefs became more greedy and bold than at any time before. Increasing wave of the robbery forces us to protect our property against lawbreakers.
People know a lot of methods to guard them goods. The most simple way is have no precious things. If we don`t have anything nobody can rob us. However, I consider that it isn`t method which I would choose.
More and more people install alarm in home. Unfortunately home alarm is very expensive and only well-off person can afford it. Alarm`s running is very plain. If somebody unauthorized want to get in our home , system will turn on, alarm will scare robbers and notify the nearest police station.
Very popular and above all expectation effective solution is big and dread dog. Barking and slump teeth can effectively dissuade criminals from burglary. Dog demand from us much attention. Unfortunately offenders have a lot of manners for example poison or nerve gas which strikes down every dog.
Probably everyone know that the one reliable solution of protect doesn`t exist. We just have to pay attention and not parade of our property because a postern door makes a thief.
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Robbery is one o the most popular crimes. The police estimate that robbers commit about 45% criminal offences. Recently thiefs became more greedy and bold than at any time before. Increasing wave of the robbery forces us to protect our property against lawbreakers.
People know a lot of methods to guard them goods. The most simple way is have no precious things. If we don`t have anything nobody can rob us. However, I consider that it isn`t method which I would choose.
More and more people install alarm in home. Unfortunately home alarm is very expensive and only well-off person can afford it. Alarm`s running is very plain. If somebody unauthorized want to get in our home , system will turn on, alarm will scare robbers and notify the nearest police station.
Very popular and above all expectation effective solution is big and dread dog. Barking and slump teeth can effectively dissuade criminals from burglary. Dog demand from us much attention. Unfortunately offenders have a lot of manners for example poison or nerve gas which strikes down every dog.
Probably everyone know that the one reliable solution of protect doesn`t exist. We just have to pay attention and not parade of our property because a postern door makes a thief.
Z góry dzięki.