prośba o sprawdzenie dwóch krótkich opisów
: 15 kwie 2009, 1:55
Witam. Mam do napisania 4 wypracowania z angielskiego. Dwa z nich już
mam gotowe, ale nie wiem, jakie i ile błędów popełniłam. Będę bardzo wdzięczna za pomoc w sprawdzeniu...
1. Opisz miejsce, które poleciłabyś na wakacje w Polsce.
In my opinion the best place to visit in Poland is Dunajec River Gorge. For me this is the most beautiful space in the Europe. Though Dunajec Gorge is one of the best-known tourist attraction in the Pieniny Mountains, people still doesn’t know enough about this place.
Dunajec is beautiful any time of the year. Besides it is possible to find wonderful experience on highlander river raft excursion. Guides tell wonderful stories about Janosik- polish Hero like Robin Hood. Wooden canoe trips have been organized daily by highlanders since the early 19th century — when their customers consisted mostly of guests of nearby Niedzica and Czorsztyn castles. The trip begins in the village of Sromowce Kąty, and ends in the resort town of Szczawnica, 18 kilometres downstream. It takes about 2-3 hours.
The Gorge is part of a valley located within the Pieniny National Park. The landscape distinguishes it from surrounding mountains due to interaction of natural factors such as geological ground, relief, water, soil, climate, flora and fauna, and their evolutionary relationships. All these elements contribute to the complexity of the natural beauty of the whole area.
Everyone who visited Dunajec River Gorge could see that Nature is the most sophisticated artist. If you want to see a miracle of the nature, you should go there.
2. Opisz, jak wyglądał Twój pierwszy dzień w szkole średniej.
My first day in high school was probably the worst day in my life. When I was choosing my new school I hoped my class will be fine and well organized. But when I saw the people from my new class, I noticed that there was only one girl whom I knew from high school, Ewa. And the worst was that my class included thirty girls and only two boys. I was afraid because it is easier to have good relationships with boys than with girls. I thought that my new class won’t be good for me because all that people for me seemed to be very calm and interested only in learning, like typical bookworms.
Teachers seemed to be very strict and exacting. It was hard for me to adjust. I couldn't remember in which classroom I had lessons, so I was never on time. Because of that, teachers weren't nice for me.
After few weeks it occurred that my class is very organized and people support each other. But when I saw them for the very first time I felt alienated and didn’t know what to do. Now I know that I couldn't leave this class because they are the best people I have ever met.
1. Opisz miejsce, które poleciłabyś na wakacje w Polsce.
In my opinion the best place to visit in Poland is Dunajec River Gorge. For me this is the most beautiful space in the Europe. Though Dunajec Gorge is one of the best-known tourist attraction in the Pieniny Mountains, people still doesn’t know enough about this place.
Dunajec is beautiful any time of the year. Besides it is possible to find wonderful experience on highlander river raft excursion. Guides tell wonderful stories about Janosik- polish Hero like Robin Hood. Wooden canoe trips have been organized daily by highlanders since the early 19th century — when their customers consisted mostly of guests of nearby Niedzica and Czorsztyn castles. The trip begins in the village of Sromowce Kąty, and ends in the resort town of Szczawnica, 18 kilometres downstream. It takes about 2-3 hours.
The Gorge is part of a valley located within the Pieniny National Park. The landscape distinguishes it from surrounding mountains due to interaction of natural factors such as geological ground, relief, water, soil, climate, flora and fauna, and their evolutionary relationships. All these elements contribute to the complexity of the natural beauty of the whole area.
Everyone who visited Dunajec River Gorge could see that Nature is the most sophisticated artist. If you want to see a miracle of the nature, you should go there.
2. Opisz, jak wyglądał Twój pierwszy dzień w szkole średniej.
My first day in high school was probably the worst day in my life. When I was choosing my new school I hoped my class will be fine and well organized. But when I saw the people from my new class, I noticed that there was only one girl whom I knew from high school, Ewa. And the worst was that my class included thirty girls and only two boys. I was afraid because it is easier to have good relationships with boys than with girls. I thought that my new class won’t be good for me because all that people for me seemed to be very calm and interested only in learning, like typical bookworms.
Teachers seemed to be very strict and exacting. It was hard for me to adjust. I couldn't remember in which classroom I had lessons, so I was never on time. Because of that, teachers weren't nice for me.
After few weeks it occurred that my class is very organized and people support each other. But when I saw them for the very first time I felt alienated and didn’t know what to do. Now I know that I couldn't leave this class because they are the best people I have ever met.