Moj wymarzony dom
: 11 maja 2009, 4:14
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House of my dream is located in mountain, next to small river or picteresque lake. It;s one floor, wooden house with steep roof. Around the house there's full of flowers, big garden. In the garden you can hear rustling leafs and singing birds. Whole garden is filled smell of flowers and fruits from my orchard.
Before toy enter through creakly door, you may stay on a moment on the big, cosy porch. Downstairs there's big living room with fireplace. You can have a rest on comfortable, leather sofa or armchairs near crackling fire. Next to living room you can see bright kitchen full of delicious smells of bakes. When you left kitchen you can see many hunting trophy. Throught the oak stairs you can go on attic. On the right are two bedrooms with huge, cosy four-poster beds. From windows you can see beautiful landscape of mountain. On the left of the stairs are bthroom and my room, where you can sit in deep armchair and listening music or watching TV.
My house is so amazing . Every morning I can goes on fishing or walking. This is peaceful place, where I can feel safe and relaxed.
House of my dream is located in mountain, next to small river or picteresque lake. It;s one floor, wooden house with steep roof. Around the house there's full of flowers, big garden. In the garden you can hear rustling leafs and singing birds. Whole garden is filled smell of flowers and fruits from my orchard.
Before toy enter through creakly door, you may stay on a moment on the big, cosy porch. Downstairs there's big living room with fireplace. You can have a rest on comfortable, leather sofa or armchairs near crackling fire. Next to living room you can see bright kitchen full of delicious smells of bakes. When you left kitchen you can see many hunting trophy. Throught the oak stairs you can go on attic. On the right are two bedrooms with huge, cosy four-poster beds. From windows you can see beautiful landscape of mountain. On the left of the stairs are bthroom and my room, where you can sit in deep armchair and listening music or watching TV.
My house is so amazing . Every morning I can goes on fishing or walking. This is peaceful place, where I can feel safe and relaxed.