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Życie na wsi i w mieście.

: 20 paź 2009, 20:13
autor: Hiya
Mam opisać wady i zalety jednego i drugiego miejsca zamieszkania. Jeśli ktoś ma chwilę i ochotę, to proszę o sprawdzenie, wypisanie i poprawienie błędów oraz wyjaśnienie dlaczego jest źle.

As everything around us living in a city's got advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, when you live in a city, you can get anywhere you want in a while. You don't need to care about money, there are many job offers, you've also got major abilities and more chances to get a better job and to earn much more money. In a city people have a bigger choice of schools and universities so they can get necessary qualifications easly. And probably the best advantage for young people (and not only for young)- entertainment. There are loads of discos, cinemas, monuments, museums and so on.
What about disadvantages? It's really loudly there. You also must to used to air pollution and that apartments are quite expensive (especially in a city centre). The biggest problem is that you may come across some unkind neighbours. Nowadays many teenagers who live in cities are getting into a crime so living in a city is much more dangerous for you and your childer.
Valleys are the best place to rest after a day full of hard work. Nowadays so many people are moving to the valley because they are tired of noise and tumult. If you want to get relaxed and you prefer calm areas- valley is the best solution for you. You can also admire many picturesque valleys and views that are breathtaking.
Lets move on to disadvantages. The fact is that most of the valleys inhibitions (chodzi o mieszkańców wsi, ale nie mam zielonego pojęcia, w jaki inny sposób to napisać) must to struggle against (czy moż…e with?) poverty. The other thing is everyone knows each other. It may be the cause of some unpleasant gossips. It's true that if you live in a solitary place nobody disturbes you, however, when you need some immediate help there's no one to count on (czy lepiej: you can count on?). Moreover, public communication fails quite often there.

/thanks in advance.

Re: Życie na wsi i w mieście.

: 21 paź 2009, 6:16
autor: Faemu
As everything else, living in a city has advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, when you live in a city, you have everything nearby . You don't need to care about money, because there are many job offers, and if you have extra qualifications, you should have a better chance of finding a well-paid job. In a city people have a bigger choice of schools and universities which means they can get necessary qualifications easier. The best advantage for young people is probably an (and not only for young) entertainment. There are loads of discos, cinemas, monuments, museums and so on.

What about disadvantages? It’s loud in a city. You must breathe a polluted air and apartments are quite expensive (especially in a city centre). The biggest problem is that you may come across unkind neighbours. Nowadays many teenagers living in cities have a tendency to commit crimes which means that it is much more dangerous for you and your children to live there.

Countryside is the best place to rest after a day of hard work. These days so many people move to countryside because they are tired of hustle and bustle. If you want to relax and you prefer calm areas , countryside is the best solution for you. You can also enjoy exploring the terrain around you.
Lets move on to disadvantages. The fact is that most of the countryside inhabitants are poor (najprościej tak to napisać). The other thing is everyone knows each other. You may become a victim of some unpleasant gossips. It's true that if you live in a crowded place nobody will disturbe you. However, when you need some immediate help there might be no one you can count on. Moreover, public communication fails quite often there.


Moż…liwe, ż…e są jakieś błędy które ominąłem, a moż…e i nawet sam je zrobiłem przy poprawianiu twojej pracy.

Jeż…eli zmieniłem sens w niektórych zdaniach to przeprzaszam :prosi: ,
bo 1 lub 2-óch rzeczy nie zrozumiałem, więc musiałem to zrobić.

A co do poprawiania niektórych rzeczy to nie wiem czy było to konieczne, ale moje "JA" by te słowa zamieniło na takie.


Hustle and bustle (idiom) - zgiełk i hałas

EDIT: Według mnie powinnaś/eś zrobić jeszcze zakończenie jeż…eli ma być to porządny esej, bo skończyłeś/aś na argumentowaniu jak narazie.

Re: Życie na wsi i w mieście.

: 22 paź 2009, 7:28
autor: eveline001
Faemu pisze:As everything else, living in a city has advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, when you live in a city, you have everything nearby . You don't need to care about money, because there are many job offers, and if you have extra qualifications, you should have a better chance of finding a well-paid job. In a city people have a bigger choice of schools and universities which means they can get necessary qualifications easier. The best advantage for young people is probably an (and not only for young) entertainment. There are loads of discos, cinemas, monuments, museums and so on.

What about disadvantages? It’s loud in a city. You must breathe a polluted air and apartments are quite expensive (especially in a city centre). The biggest problem is that you may come across unkind neighbours. Nowadays many teenagers living in cities have a tendency to commit crimes which means that it is much more dangerous for you and your children to live there.

Countryside is the best place to rest after a day of hard work. These days so many people move to countryside because they are tired of hustle and bustle. If you want to relax and you prefer calm areas , countryside is the best solution for you. You can also enjoy exploring the terrain around you.
Lets move on to disadvantages. The fact is that most of the countryside inhabitants are poor (najprościej tak to napisać). The other thing is everyone knows each other. You may become a victim of some unpleasant gossips. It's true that if you live in a crowded place nobody will disturbe you. However, when you need some immediate help there might be no one you can count on. Moreover, public communication fails quite often there.


Moż…liwe, ż…e są jakieś błędy które ominąłem, a moż…e i nawet sam je zrobiłem przy poprawianiu twojej pracy.

Jeż…eli zmieniłem sens w niektórych zdaniach to przeprzaszam :prosi: ,
bo 1 lub 2-óch rzeczy nie zrozumiałem, więc musiałem to zrobić.

A co do poprawiania niektórych rzeczy to nie wiem czy było to konieczne, ale moje "JA" by te słowa zamieniło na takie.


Hustle and bustle (idiom) - zgiełk i hałas

EDIT: Według mnie powinnaś/eś zrobić jeszcze zakończenie jeż…eli ma być to porządny esej, bo skończyłeś/aś na argumentowaniu jak narazie.




A ja swoje poprawki dodaje:

The best advantage for young people is probably (and not only for the young) entertainment.

These days, a lot of people move to .....

You can also enjoy exploring the landscape around you.

The thing is (that) most of the countryside inhabitants are poor.


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