Poprawienie błedów w zadaniu
: 17 gru 2009, 3:09
Witam bardzo proszę o szybką korekte błedów,które znajdują się w mojej
Rozprawce.
The most part of people in the world doing activities in themselves free time.Someone like safely sports,others prefer dangerous sports.I jike basketball and skiing.Those sports are most interesting for me so I will present some advatages and disadvantages of this kid of sports.
Basketball is a most popular sports in USA.The lots of young people play in this sports on street and in sportscentre.Basketball is very cheaper sports.What you need is only bal,shoes and T-shirt.Basketball is special kind of sport where you must be fit.You needn't be very high to play basketball.This sports is for everyone but you must remember that basketball is fast game and very tired sports.
Now,it's time for dangerous sports,which is rock-climbing.This sports is more expensive than bsketball and isn't as popular as basketball.How i wrot rock-climbing is very expensive becuse equipment costs a lot of money.To doing this sports you need roope,boots and helmet.It's also very dangerous sports so you must be courageous.This kind of sports is very relaxing and enjoyable,because when you climb on the top,you'll see how big thing you have done.Also is very dificulty sports to learn są you must be patient.
I hope that advantages and disadvantages which I wrote will be helpfull to choose sports,which you will be doing in your free time.
Rozprawce.
The most part of people in the world doing activities in themselves free time.Someone like safely sports,others prefer dangerous sports.I jike basketball and skiing.Those sports are most interesting for me so I will present some advatages and disadvantages of this kid of sports.
Basketball is a most popular sports in USA.The lots of young people play in this sports on street and in sportscentre.Basketball is very cheaper sports.What you need is only bal,shoes and T-shirt.Basketball is special kind of sport where you must be fit.You needn't be very high to play basketball.This sports is for everyone but you must remember that basketball is fast game and very tired sports.
Now,it's time for dangerous sports,which is rock-climbing.This sports is more expensive than bsketball and isn't as popular as basketball.How i wrot rock-climbing is very expensive becuse equipment costs a lot of money.To doing this sports you need roope,boots and helmet.It's also very dangerous sports so you must be courageous.This kind of sports is very relaxing and enjoyable,because when you climb on the top,you'll see how big thing you have done.Also is very dificulty sports to learn są you must be patient.
I hope that advantages and disadvantages which I wrote will be helpfull to choose sports,which you will be doing in your free time.