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Hi Paula!
Thank you very much for such a lovely dress you bought me for X-mas .I was amazed when I opened that gift.
It's very fashionable and comfortable . Color is wonderful you every know what me enjoy . Veronica said 'This dress very suit to your figure and reflect my personality

I really enjoyed this X-mas . parets gave me new camera - make very good pictures .
From grandparents and aunt I got some money cuz
I'm saving for a holiday in UK I want visited kamil and you of course . Oh ,we gone together on big party .

I hope you're well . Thanks agian for a dress .

xoxo

Julka

juliietee pisze:Jakby ktoś mógł sprawdzić mi ten list , sama go pisałam więc pewnie są jakieś błędy jest to list podziękowania za prezent .
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Hi Paula!
Thank you very much for such a lovely dress you bought me for X-mas .I was amazed when I opened that gift.
It's very fashionable and comfortable . Color is wonderful you every know what me enjoy . Veronica said 'This dress very suit to your figure and reflect my personality

I really enjoyed this X-mas . parets gave me new camera - make very good pictures .
From grandparents and aunt I got some money cuz
I'm saving for a holiday in UK I want visited kamil and you of course . Oh ,we gone together on big party .

I hope you're well . Thanks agian for a dress .

xoxo

Julka

Hi Paula!
Thank you very much for such a lovely dress which you bought me for X-mas. I was amazed when I opened that gift.
It's very fashionable and comfortable and have a perfect colour. You always know what I enjoy! Veronica said 'This dress very suit to your figure and reflect your personality'

I really enjoyed this X-mas . Parets gave me a new camera which making very good pictures. Grandparents and aunt gave me some money cause I'm saving for a holiday in UK. I want to visit Kamil and you of course . Oh ,we gone together on a big party .

I hope you're well . Thanks again for a dress.

xoxo

Julka

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Hi Paula!
Thank you very much for such a lovely dress which you bought me for X-mas. I was amazed when I opened that gift.
It's very fashionable and comfortable and it has a perfect colour. You always know what I enjoy! Veronica said 'This dress suits to your figure and reflects your personality'

I really enjoyed this X-mas . My parents gave me a new camera which makes very good pictures. Grandparents and aunt gave me some money cause save for a holiday in UK. I want to visit Kamil and you of course . Oh ,we will go together on a big party .

I hope you're well . Thanks again for the dress.

xoxo

Julka

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