Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie opowiadania.. Bardzo pilne.
: 08 kwie 2010, 22:12
When she was walking home, she could see thunders flashing and she heard rolls of thunders. Suddenly a A thunderbolt struck the tree. The tree was burning. She was horrified. She shouted:
`Oh, no! What should I do now? How I get home?` She shouted.
She tried to control herself. She decided to call for the fire service and come back house other way. When she was running, suddenly she noticed there was a little girl crying and trembling with fear. She decided to check.
`Hi, what happened? Why are you crying? You`re so cold! Let`t come back home!`
`No, wait! My dog - Lampo run away. When I was with him on a walk suddenly the storm broke out. He could see a thunders flashing and he heard very noisy sound!`- The girl answered.
All the time she was trembling and crying. She decided to bring her to her home.
`Everything will be OK. You must come back home. I`m sure your mum is worry.` - She said.
But she didn`t want to go.
`I must find Lampo!` - The girl shouted.
`Ok, when the storm will pass, we`ll go to find him. Ok?` - She said.
`Sure` - The girl answered.
She brought her to his home. When She was passing the break tree, She could see a dog barking and howling on the tree.
`Oh, I`m sure that this is Lampo. I`ll bring him to VIcki.` - She said.
Vicki was so suprised and happy.
`Oh, no! What should I do now? How I get home?` She shouted.
She tried to control herself. She decided to call for the fire service and come back house other way. When she was running, suddenly she noticed there was a little girl crying and trembling with fear. She decided to check.
`Hi, what happened? Why are you crying? You`re so cold! Let`t come back home!`
`No, wait! My dog - Lampo run away. When I was with him on a walk suddenly the storm broke out. He could see a thunders flashing and he heard very noisy sound!`- The girl answered.
All the time she was trembling and crying. She decided to bring her to her home.
`Everything will be OK. You must come back home. I`m sure your mum is worry.` - She said.
But she didn`t want to go.
`I must find Lampo!` - The girl shouted.
`Ok, when the storm will pass, we`ll go to find him. Ok?` - She said.
`Sure` - The girl answered.
She brought her to his home. When She was passing the break tree, She could see a dog barking and howling on the tree.
`Oh, I`m sure that this is Lampo. I`ll bring him to VIcki.` - She said.
Vicki was so suprised and happy.