opowiadanie krótkie i e-mail formalny -sprawdzenie
: 19 paź 2010, 1:27
Mam prośbę, czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić to opowiadanie i poprawić błędy? Byłabym bardzo wdzięczna 
Before boy, who I like asked me out I had promised my friend to go shopping together. I choose a date. So I said my friend that I'm ill and I have to stay at home. She understood and wished me return to health. While I with boy were eating pizza, my friend did shopping in the same shopping centre. She was angry when she noticed us. I apologized her and I promised that it never happen again.
Dear Ms Brow
I have just found your email address on the website "Friends Reunited".
I will be diilighted if you would like renew our acquaintance. I am working now in "The Times". I am journalist and for surely work in your company helps me gain experience. I got married and I have daughter, who is 2 years old. I changed my small flat for big house. I am satisfied with my life. In the future I would like to go to trip to Africa and write a book about this country.
What have you heard? What feel your wife?
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
With best wishes
Natalia ...
Pozdrawiam
Before boy, who I like asked me out I had promised my friend to go shopping together. I choose a date. So I said my friend that I'm ill and I have to stay at home. She understood and wished me return to health. While I with boy were eating pizza, my friend did shopping in the same shopping centre. She was angry when she noticed us. I apologized her and I promised that it never happen again.
Dear Ms Brow
I have just found your email address on the website "Friends Reunited".
I will be diilighted if you would like renew our acquaintance. I am working now in "The Times". I am journalist and for surely work in your company helps me gain experience. I got married and I have daughter, who is 2 years old. I changed my small flat for big house. I am satisfied with my life. In the future I would like to go to trip to Africa and write a book about this country.
What have you heard? What feel your wife?
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
With best wishes
Natalia ...
Pozdrawiam