Opowiadanie- proszę o sprawdzenie
: 27 mar 2011, 17:21
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This was two years ago. at 18 am I finished lessons and went to the bus stop to go home. I was very tired and I'm just about to board the bus and relax. On the bus there were a lot of people, who were also waiting for the bus. According to the timetable it should be at 18.30, so I went to the the shop to buy bread. When I got back was only 10 minutes to the departure of the bus. Ten minutes later we received information that the bus was canceled and another one will be only for 2 hours. Everyone was very nervously, we went to the informational, to find out why it was canceled our bus, but proved that the information and the station is closed. Outside it was -10 degrees Celsius, we had no place to go before freeze. One of the passengers tried to get through to the manager but got no answer, people were very angry. Everyone was tired after school and work. Few people phoned to his friends that when they arrived. The rest of the people waiting for the next bus. Everyone was angry and embarrassed by this situation. We decided to submit a petition.
Prosiłbym o sprawdzenie powyż szego opowiadania.
This was two years ago. at 18 am I finished lessons and went to the bus stop to go home. I was very tired and I'm just about to board the bus and relax. On the bus there were a lot of people, who were also waiting for the bus. According to the timetable it should be at 18.30, so I went to the the shop to buy bread. When I got back was only 10 minutes to the departure of the bus. Ten minutes later we received information that the bus was canceled and another one will be only for 2 hours. Everyone was very nervously, we went to the informational, to find out why it was canceled our bus, but proved that the information and the station is closed. Outside it was -10 degrees Celsius, we had no place to go before freeze. One of the passengers tried to get through to the manager but got no answer, people were very angry. Everyone was tired after school and work. Few people phoned to his friends that when they arrived. The rest of the people waiting for the next bus. Everyone was angry and embarrassed by this situation. We decided to submit a petition.
Prosiłbym o sprawdzenie powyż szego opowiadania.