czy to brzmi logicznie i pomoze ktos poprawic bledy?
: 13 maja 2011, 22:56
autor: nettles
When I got to home I decided organized big party. I invited my friend and family. Everything was to be a great. In the Monday morning I went to the shopping and bought vegetables,fruit,cake and drink. Suddenly I seen new suit at promotional price.I decided that I must have it. He was beautiful.in the very favorable price. In the afternoon I make a party dinner. New purchase I left in the bedroom and I opened to windows because was hot. I forgotten that i didn't have a candles so I quickly went to the shop. When I got home I heard strange noises . I opened a bedroom and stunned speechless.I seen broken pot and glass bottles which dirtied every suit. I was furious. New suit was to remove. Everyone were to be here in ten minutes. I taken a suit and I started to clean it. Fortunately stains quickly went. Party was a success and each was a happy
Re: czy to brzmi logicznie i pomoze ktos poprawic bledy?
: 15 maja 2011, 9:05
autor: Gość
When I got home I decided to organize a big party. I invited my friends and family. Everything was supposed to great. On Monday morning I went to do some of the shopping and bought vegetables, fruits, a cake and drinks. Then I saw a new suit at a promotional price. I decided that I had to have it. It was beautiful and at a very favorable price. That afternoon I hosted a dinner party. I left my new purchases in the bedroom and I opened the windows because it was hot. I forgot that I didn't have candles so I quickly went to the store. When I got home I heard some strange noises. I opened the bedroom door and stood stunned and speechless. I saw a broken pot and glass bottles which soiled my new suit. I was furious. Everyone was supposed to be here in ten minutes. I took the suit and I started to clean it. Fortunately the stains went away quickly. The party was a success and everyone was happy.