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This graph represents the total sales of CD's, LP's and cassetts in the U.K. between 1973 and 1997. The graph shows that there was a gradual decrease in the sales of LP's for a period of about 10 years.Cassettes were the least popular during the period 1973 to 1984. The graph indicates that the sales of cassettes increased moderately from 1973 to 1989, but in 1989 there was a sharp fall. The graph shows that there was a significant rise in sales of GD's between 1983 and 1996.
This graph represents the total sales of CD's, LP's and cassetts in the U.K. between 1973 and 1997. The graph shows that there was a gradual decrease in the sales of LP's for a period of about 10 years.Cassettes were the least popular during the period 1973 to 1984. The graph indicates that the sales of cassettes increased moderately from 1973 to 1989, but in 1989 there was a sharp fall. The graph shows that there was a significant rise in sales of GD's between 1983 and 1996.