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Jest to zagadnienie do ustnej wypowiedzi, nie chodzi mi tyle o sprawdzenie literówek, co sensu, gramatyki, poprawnego uż…ycia słów. Z góry dziękuję") Jeśli ktoś miałby również… cos ciekawego do dopisania to chętnie skorzystam. Ania

It`s very difficult etical problem. Terrorism is terrible phenomeon. All terror attacks have coused the death of thousands of innoncent people. The terrorists goal is not to cause massive death or destruction but to inspire panic within a population.
I remember when 11th September 2001 terrorist hijackied a two planes with passangers. Plans stricked against WTC towers. Too many people losed life or healt. I think that terrorism will be neutralizly. I know that in the war against terrorism died hundrets people, e.g. soliders and innoncent people. Their family are heart is heavy. The war against terrorism is very expensive.United States paid 20 milions dolars on this aim every day.
Every war is bad and can born a new wars or revenges. War is an immoral event that ruins humanity, The gavernment should choose other way to limit terrorism attacks.

It`s a very difficult ethical problem. Terrorism is a terrible phenomenon. All the terror attacks have caused death of thousands of innoncent people. The terrorists' goal is not to cause a massive death or destruction but to inspire panic within a population.
I remember when on the 11th September 2001 the terrorists hijacked two planes with the passangers. The planes striked against the WTC towers. Too many people lost their lives or health then. I think that terrorism will be neutralized. There have died thousands of people in the wars against terrorism, e.g. soldiers or innoncent people. Their families' hearts are strong (???). A war against terrorism is very expensive. The United States pay 20 milion dollars for this aim every day.
Every war is bad and can bear new wars or revenges (???). A war is an immortal event that ruins humanity, The government should choose a different way to limit terrorism attacks.

Więc tak, najważ…niejsze - pamiętaj o przedimkach (articles, a, an, the)!!! To bardzo waż…na część języka... Nic się nie stanie, jak o któryś zapomnisz (sam pewnie nie wychwyciłem z Twojego tekstu wszystkich ) ale ze 12 błędów w raptem 14/15 zdaniach? Trochę za duż…o
Dalej - sporo literówek. Na tekście nie zaznaczyłem kilku, bo po prostu wynikały z usunięcia niektórych liter... Ale mam nadzieję, ż…e to tylko ze względu na to, ż…e się spieszyłaś
Dalej - czasy. "Born" jest głównie uż…ywane w str. biernej => czas teraźniejszy to "bear", tak jak niedźwiadek . I błąd, który mnie wręcz poraził - "losed" :O. LOST, LOST, LOST!!!
Pamiętaj - to pay for - płacić za.
Nie zrozumiałem zbytnio o co Ci chodzi w zdaniu: " Their family are heart is heavy.", które przerobiłem w: "Their families' hearts are strong". Chodzi o to, ż…e ich rodziny dobrze sobie radzą z niebezpieczeństwem u bliskich? A moż…e, ż…e ich rodziny są zranione? (hurt) Tak w ogóle, zdanie które napisałaś znaczy: "Ich rodzina są serce jest ci꿅kie"

OK, to by było na tyle. Jak moż…esz, napisz mi na którym poziomie angielskiego jesteś, to Ci dam parę innych rad .

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