Zadanie/wiersz
: 10 kwie 2012, 4:36
Witam 
uczęszczam do liceum i nauczycielka zadała nam napisanie wiersza po angielsku, nie chodzi tu o treści merytoryczne, ale prosiłabym o sprawdzenie gramatyki i poprawności w zakresie języka angielskiego
uczę się dopiero 5 lat więc proszę o wyrozumiałość. z góry dziękuję.
Mother told me the mystery story,
Of one of the southern heroes,
He was engraved in my memory,
He chose to fight without bow and arrows.
He left his family and loyal friends,
Hero had to put all behind him
And choose risky travel to end of ends
He wanted to find deaths and tried to win.
It was one of these dark winter days
When everything isn’t going great
Brave hero was moving the wrong ways
He couldn’t cope with feeling love and hate.
What more this ancient story
Says about the wisest king of kings
He ruled in majesty and glory
He did many wonderful things
Old king was the keeper of the right
Greybeard taught our heroic man
How to find treasure in the daily life
And told him God’s secret plan.
King reiterated “Live in the name of love,
And have a safe journey home brother,
Family, friendship! There’s nothing above,
Change your life in one way or another”
uczęszczam do liceum i nauczycielka zadała nam napisanie wiersza po angielsku, nie chodzi tu o treści merytoryczne, ale prosiłabym o sprawdzenie gramatyki i poprawności w zakresie języka angielskiego uczę się dopiero 5 lat więc proszę o wyrozumiałość. z góry dziękuję.
Mother told me the mystery story,
Of one of the southern heroes,
He was engraved in my memory,
He chose to fight without bow and arrows.
He left his family and loyal friends,
Hero had to put all behind him
And choose risky travel to end of ends
He wanted to find deaths and tried to win.
It was one of these dark winter days
When everything isn’t going great
Brave hero was moving the wrong ways
He couldn’t cope with feeling love and hate.
What more this ancient story
Says about the wisest king of kings
He ruled in majesty and glory
He did many wonderful things
Old king was the keeper of the right
Greybeard taught our heroic man
How to find treasure in the daily life
And told him God’s secret plan.
King reiterated “Live in the name of love,
And have a safe journey home brother,
Family, friendship! There’s nothing above,
Change your life in one way or another”