Do schools prepare young people for the real world? Artykuł
: 24 kwie 2012, 2:37
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Contemporary world is changing more and more and no one is ready to face the reality after graduating. [is there better to use graduation?] Let's think who plays the significant role in preparing young people for the real world? Of course, I except that you will specify, for example, parents, friends though I would like to focus on the role of schools in this area. (w tej sprawie/kwestii)
First of all, smart teachers or lecturers can show the young the direct they should follow. Claryfing what is important in life can help them making right decision. Assuming, of course, that students aren't unresponsive to their talks.
Furthermore school gives us opportunity to cooperate with other people. It is ability which can affect our behaviour at work. Dealing with others involve patience, good manners and confidence. School is undeniably good place to get familiar to it.
What's more, we should take into account the fact that school learn us to take our responsibilities seriously. Although school duty aren't as important as those we will have to copy in adult life, they are an excellent lesson to learn responsibility.
To sum up, we can't say we aren't prepared by schools for the real life at all. Of course, school life doesn't reflect the real one as well. Giving us knowledge on particular subjects meets with teaching us respect, responsibility and hard-working. Teachers point out a right path, but there are still many things we have to learn from our mistakes.
Contemporary world is changing more and more and no one is ready to face the reality after graduating. [is there better to use graduation?] Let's think who plays the significant role in preparing young people for the real world? Of course, I except that you will specify, for example, parents, friends though I would like to focus on the role of schools in this area. (w tej sprawie/kwestii)
First of all, smart teachers or lecturers can show the young the direct they should follow. Claryfing what is important in life can help them making right decision. Assuming, of course, that students aren't unresponsive to their talks.
Furthermore school gives us opportunity to cooperate with other people. It is ability which can affect our behaviour at work. Dealing with others involve patience, good manners and confidence. School is undeniably good place to get familiar to it.
What's more, we should take into account the fact that school learn us to take our responsibilities seriously. Although school duty aren't as important as those we will have to copy in adult life, they are an excellent lesson to learn responsibility.
To sum up, we can't say we aren't prepared by schools for the real life at all. Of course, school life doesn't reflect the real one as well. Giving us knowledge on particular subjects meets with teaching us respect, responsibility and hard-working. Teachers point out a right path, but there are still many things we have to learn from our mistakes.
