Angielski.edu.pl

My name is Kamil and I am 19 years old. I live in Bytom. I am medium of high. I have brown eyes and hair, but you can see it. I am intrested in music, cars and computers. I love playing guitar and i have my band and I try to play on guiltar two or three times a week. I like going to concerts. My favourite bands are Rise Against, Green Day and Misfits. I have one brother who learn in the same school. My free time i spend with my girlfriend and my car.

Mógłby ktoś sprawdzić czy nie ma błędów w tej wypowiedzi? Nie znam się prawie w ogóle na języku angielskim, moim przewodnim językiem jest niemiecki, dlatego proszę o pomoc.

Nie jest źle! Dwie małe uwagi:

1. "I try to play on guiltar two or three times a week." - nie "two times" tylko "twice"
2. nie "intrested" tylko "interested"

Poza tym wszystko ok.
PS. do nauki polecam repetytoria z longmana, są naprawdę pomocne.

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