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Sprawdzenie pracy

: 31 maja 2014, 16:40
autor: olgab96
Dear Sir/Madame
I am writing in connection with your job advert for Student Hospitality Programme in Spain which appeared in the latest edition edition of Gap Year Earners. I am interested in working as an aerobic instructor.
I am an eighteen-year-old Polish student and I am I second class at II. High School. I am due to start a sport science degree at School of Physical Education in 2016. Meanwhile, however, I want to combine traveling with gaining work experience, so I believe I am well suited for this position.
I thing that I am a strong candidate for job aerobic instructor. For the last four year I have done a lot of sport courses: personal trainer, aerobic and Zumba instructor. In that time I have passed pedagogical course so I can work with people of all ages.
Apart from this, I am mature, easy-going and charismatic. On the pedagogical course I have learnt how to motivate and encourage people. I am acquainted with a lot of sport style and I want to devolve my abilities to others people, with great enthusiasm, of course. I am also extremely interested in sport disciplines and it was my childhood dream to be an aerobic instructor, because my mother was sending me on dance lessons and from these early experiences as a child I learned to love sport. I consider myself to be adaptable and able to conform individual exercise to everybody.
I would be wondering attend an interviews at your earliest convenience.
I attach my CV along with the names of two references.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 04 cze 2014, 12:45
autor: ninjakick
Praca ogólnie napisana całkiem nieźle. Poniż…ej wykaz błedów. ( korekta )

I am writing in response to your job advert regarding Student...

aerobics instructor zamiast aerobic instructor (aerobic - aerobowy; aerobics - aerobik)

I am 18 years old and I'm in High School (second grade).

...combine travelling and gaining work experience...

I think I am a strong candidate as far as the position of an aerobics instructor is concerned.

For the last four years... (zamiast ' year ')

...with a lot of sport disciplines and I want to share my skills with other people.

ponownie ' aerobics instructor ' zamiast ' aerobic instructor '

...because my mother sent me to dance classes...

' flexible' zamiast ' adaptable '

...and able to adjust individual exercises to everybody's needs and abilities.

I would like to attend an interview at your earliest convenience.

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 01 wrz 2014, 12:33
autor: luxur
Sam to napisałeś?

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 01 wrz 2014, 12:37
autor: olgab96
owszem, a co?

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 23 lip 2015, 18:06
autor: daniela87
Jak sam to z tego wszystkiego na pewno masz pewną 4 i na pewno to jest dobra ocena. Podoba mi się to oraz podoba mi się również to, że akurat sam to napisałeś bez takich większych jakiś błędów językowych. Możesz teraz być na pewno z siebie dumny, kawał dobrej roboty bracie ;)

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 18 lut 2016, 12:44
autor: akinnda
Dobra praca:)

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 17 mar 2016, 23:00
autor: Milka900
Zapraszam do niezbędnika na Facebooku w pisaniu pracy dyplomowej, tj. : https://www.facebook.com/Konsultacje-w- ... ych-oraz-tłumaczenia-w-języku-niemieckim-308675285831487/?fref=ts

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 06 lut 2019, 12:39
autor: Marcyliusz14AK
Dla mnie pasuje :)

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 03 lip 2019, 9:54
autor: Inkwizytor787
Jak dla mnie wszystko jest ok. Tak ja to wszystko widzę!
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Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 21 lis 2019, 11:03
autor: Monster948
Najlepiej zlecić tworzenie pracy jakiemuś ekspertowi on na pewno skutecznie pomoże osiągnąć sukces!
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Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 22 gru 2019, 6:35
autor: volord2

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 16 kwie 2022, 16:12
autor: vlord

Re: Sprawdzenie pracy

: 10 cze 2022, 20:17
autor: vlord
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