Re: essay
: 09 maja 2005, 19:33
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szy tekst.
Although wealth is desired by many people, it is often suggested that it does not bring happiness. However, others have a completely different opinion.
What is true is that, that if we are wealthy, we are able to make most of our dreams come true. For instance, we can travel around the world, attend universities with high school-fees, buy almost everything we want. It is undoubtedly true that rich people can afford many things the poor ones cannot. What is more, if we are unselfish, we may help poor people or sundry charities. A part of society loves making others happy and wealth lets them do so. Last but not least, riches mean that we don't have to worry about the future. Bills and other financial matters are not a problem any more.
On the other hand, money might make us worse people: we may become arrogant and self-centered. As a result, our relationships with family and friends might be ruined. Moreover, wealthy people may have lots of false friends who care only about their money and that fact is not pleasant. Lastly rich men and their families might become victims of kidnappers who often want very high ransoms. Their lives may be even at stake.
To sum up, wisely used money is very useful, but we ought to remeber that it sometimes does not guarantee happiness. To a large degree our lives are determined by our own acts.
Z góry dzięki.
Although wealth is desired by many people, it is often suggested that it does not bring happiness. However, others have a completely different opinion.
What is true is that, that if we are wealthy, we are able to make most of our dreams come true. For instance, we can travel around the world, attend universities with high school-fees, buy almost everything we want. It is undoubtedly true that rich people can afford many things the poor ones cannot. What is more, if we are unselfish, we may help poor people or sundry charities. A part of society loves making others happy and wealth lets them do so. Last but not least, riches mean that we don't have to worry about the future. Bills and other financial matters are not a problem any more.
On the other hand, money might make us worse people: we may become arrogant and self-centered. As a result, our relationships with family and friends might be ruined. Moreover, wealthy people may have lots of false friends who care only about their money and that fact is not pleasant. Lastly rich men and their families might become victims of kidnappers who often want very high ransoms. Their lives may be even at stake.
To sum up, wisely used money is very useful, but we ought to remeber that it sometimes does not guarantee happiness. To a large degree our lives are determined by our own acts.
Z góry dzięki.