Dwa teksty do sprawdzenia - proszę, b.pilne

[Visitor]

Witajcie,
chciałabym prosić Was bardzo o sprawdzenie dwóch tekstów:

1) Będąc na kursie w Anglii masz zorganizować wycieczkę do muzeum. Napisz zaproszenie:
I'm organising voyage to The National Museum of England. The trip is planned for 25th of March and will take about 3 hours. Only students of our course can sign in and the ticket's price is Ł20 (bus counted in). We're meeting at 09:00 a.m. on 25th at the entrance of D-5 building.
See you there!
XYZ

2) Podanie o stypendium na wyjazd do Anglii:
Dear Sir or Madam!
I am writing to you regarding a scholarship for journey to England.
I have been learning English in the “British School" for seven years now. The most important to me are communication skills in English, making statements and reflections in this language. In close future I would like to study English Philology and, after graduate, work as an interpreter. In my opinion it is one of the most interesting professions. I am also interested in british culture, especially history and literature. Two months ago I won a provincial competition of knowledge about the history and culture of England. That is why I think that I am the best candidate to get this scholarship.
I would be grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
XYZ


Z góry bardzo dziękuję,
Julka

[sunday]

zrobilabym to tak:

We are organising a trip to The National Museum of England. It is planned on 25th of March and is going to take about 3 hours. It's only for the students from our course, so please sign in quickly, till there are left tickets. The price of them is Ł20 for each one (bus counted in). We're meeting at 09:00 a.m. at the entrance of D-5 building.
See you there!
XYZ

tez prosilabym jeszcze o sprawdzenie kogos madrzejszego :-)
pozdrawiam

[sunday]

no i jeszcze ten drugi text :-)

Dear Sir or Madam!
I am writing to you regarding a scholarship for a journey to England.
I have been learning English at the “British School" for seven years. The most important to me are communication skills in English, making statements and reflections in this language. In the close future I would like to study English philology and, after graduating, to work as an interpreter. In my opinion it is one of the most interesting professions. I am also interested in British culture, especially history and literature. Two months ago I have won a provincial competition of knowledge about the history and culture of England. That is why I think that I am a very good candidate to get this scholarship.
I would be grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
XYZ


no i znowu, prosba o sprawdzenie przez kogos kto tu jest madrzejszy, moze smartie sie udzieli :> :-)

[Visitor]

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