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Everton, April 25, 2006

Dear Mrs Kate Ashby,

I am writing to you because I would like to apply for the job in Green Pepper Cafe which I saw advertised in a newspaper.

I am 19 years old and I have just finished high school. During last summer I have been working in Red’s Milk Bar as a waiter, so I know various kinds of food. In high school I have been working as a volunteer in school charity, so in my opinion I am a kind, friendly person and I have got good communication skills. I have a reasonable command of English, German and Polish. I am not going to study for next year, so working full time is not a problem for me.

I think I would be a suitable candidate for this position because I enjoy working with people very much. Furthermore I have got good qualifications, well-developed skills and my previous employers can recommend me.

I am able to provide references. I am available to attend an interview whenever you wish. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully,

kilka niezancznych pomyłek; bardzo dobrze napisane

Dear Mrs. Kate Ashby, [TN1]

I am writing to you because I would like to apply for the job in the Green Pepper Cafe which I saw advertised in a newspaper.

I am 19 years old and I have just finished high school. Last summer [TN2] I was [TN3] working in Red’s Milk Bar as a waiter, so I know about various kinds of food. In high school I used to work [TN3] as a volunteer for a school charity, so in my opinion I am a kind, friendly person, and I have [TN4] good communication skills. I have a reasonable command of English, German and Polish. I am not going to study next year, so working full time is not a problem for me.

I think I would be a suitable candidate for this position because I enjoy working with people very much. Furthermore, I have [TN4] good qualifications, well-developed skills, and my previous employers can recommend me.

I am able to provide references. I am available to attend an interview whenever you wish. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully,


TN1 Ms moż…e mieć albo nie mieć kropki, ale Mr. i Mrs. powinny ją mieć.
TN2 niepotrzebny jest during przed last summer, last month, etc.
TN3 have been working to raczej powinno być uż…yte jeśli ta praca się jeszcze nie skończyła.
TN4 got oraz have got też… moż…na powiedzieć, tylko ż…e to nieformalne

Znamy nazwisko osoby, do której piszemy (Kate Ashby) tak więc na końcu "yours sincerely"

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