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My name is imię. I am xx years old. I live in miasto in Poland.Miasto is a small town. My hobby is Sport. My favourite discyplines of sport are football and volleyball. In my free time I play football with my friends and I play computer games. My favourite football club is HSV Hamburg and Real Madrid.I am tall and slim and I am very friendly. I collect photos with autograph, tickets, pennant and award from clubs, players and federations. I would care about the autographs..I am kindly asking You to send me photos with autographs. I don't count on T-shirt,ball... because I know that millions fans write to you. Thank You very, very much for interest in my person and my request. I wish you good luck and a lot of successes!!! Greetings from miasto!


aha i chcialbym dopisac jeszcze "Jesteś Moim ulubionym piłkarzem, zawsze Ci kibicuję"


Dzięki

sport z małej litery.

"disciplines", nie "discyplines".

I collect photos with autographS.

PennantS, awardS.

"I would care about the autographs" zastąp "I would appreciate some autographs".

"I don't count on.." zastąp "I'm not counting on..." albo "I'm not hoping for..."

"Thank you very for much for interest in my person and my request..." zastąp "Thank you very much for taking my request into consideration".

"A lot of success", nie "successes."

I zdanie do tłumaczenia:

"You're my favourite football player. I have always supported you."

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