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hej prosiłabym o poprawienie tego tekstu ; )

: 13 paź 2010, 1:03
autor: Gość
certainly in a beautiful, sunny Friday afternoon, I went with my best friend Marika shopping for a new shopping center. When shopping with bags full we went for ice cream. We sat at the table when he suddenly sat up to us the two men. They said they carried out a survey which aims to check which stores most commonly used by teenagers. We were very curious and amazed by this survey so with Marika We asked a lot of things. These men are not aroused suspicions.
as it turned out wrong. During the conversation, apologized and went to the toilet. When I returned, my heart stopped. Our table was empty, there was neither male nor Marika was only our shopping bag and Marika. I ran panicked to handle ice cream shop I asked if they did not see my friend. The nerves began to scream, cry, I did not know what to do. Once calmed down I called the police. Unfortunately, my best friend was not found until today.

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: 13 paź 2010, 21:39
autor: dfdfd
In a beautiful, sunny Friday afternoon, I went shopping with my best friend Marika to a new shopping centre. While shopping, we went with full bags for ice cream. We sat by the table when suddenly two men sat up to us. They said they were carring out a survey which aimed to check which stores were most commonly used by teenagers. We were very curious and amazed by the survey so we asked about many things. These men were not arousing suspicions but it turned out wrong. During the conversation, I apologized and went to the toilet. When I returned, my heart stopped. Our table was empty, there was neither male nor Marika The only things left were our bags. I ran panicked to handle ice cream shop I asked if they hadn't seen my friend. The nerves began to scream, I was crying, I did not know what to do. As soon as I calmed down I called the police. Unfortunately, my best friend hasn't been found until today.

Re: hej prosiłabym o poprawienie tego tekstu ; )

: 01 sty 2020, 1:07
autor: volord2

Re: hej prosiłabym o poprawienie tego tekstu ; )

: 22 kwie 2022, 16:13
autor: vlord