Re: Opowiadanie - proszę sprawdźcie błędy!:)
: 11 cze 2005, 19:10
Na pewno jest tu kilka błędów. Moglibyście je wskazać? Z góry jestem wszystkim bardzo wdzięczna za pomoc.
Little Tony was sitting on the mother’s knees. He was pretty boy, with dark hair and gray eyes.
-It’s late, you should go to bed – said Tony’s mother.
- I know mum, just a minute, please! I have one question…
-Yes?
- Do angels really exist?
- I believe they do.
- Have you ever seen one of them?
-No, I haven’t.
- What a pity! Maybe you just haven’t seek?
- Maybe…But Tony, go to bed now! Tomorrow is a new day.
- Ow…ok mum…
-Sweet dream, I love you!
***
Angel was really tired, he worked all night. He flew from one hause to the other. He was checking that everyone kids sleep well, and haven’t nightmares. Now, there was only one hause left…Tony’s hause. It was 6 a.m. , sunrise. Fortunately, boy was still sleeping. Angel looked at him, and kissed him in cheek. “Remember, God will always love you, no matter what you did, do or will do.”-said.
Then he heard:
- Tony, wake up! You must go to the kindergarten!
Angel flew away so fast as he can. He was in a hurry so much, that he left one plume…( nie wiem czy w ogóle tak moż na nazwać anielskie pióro)
***
- What is it Tony?
- Plume…plume of an angel.
Little Tony was sitting on the mother’s knees. He was pretty boy, with dark hair and gray eyes.
-It’s late, you should go to bed – said Tony’s mother.
- I know mum, just a minute, please! I have one question…
-Yes?
- Do angels really exist?
- I believe they do.
- Have you ever seen one of them?
-No, I haven’t.
- What a pity! Maybe you just haven’t seek?
- Maybe…But Tony, go to bed now! Tomorrow is a new day.
- Ow…ok mum…
-Sweet dream, I love you!
***
Angel was really tired, he worked all night. He flew from one hause to the other. He was checking that everyone kids sleep well, and haven’t nightmares. Now, there was only one hause left…Tony’s hause. It was 6 a.m. , sunrise. Fortunately, boy was still sleeping. Angel looked at him, and kissed him in cheek. “Remember, God will always love you, no matter what you did, do or will do.”-said.
Then he heard:
- Tony, wake up! You must go to the kindergarten!
Angel flew away so fast as he can. He was in a hurry so much, that he left one plume…( nie wiem czy w ogóle tak moż na nazwać anielskie pióro)
***
- What is it Tony?
- Plume…plume of an angel.