pomoc w jednym zdanku na paralelizm please :)

[lorelaigilmore]

Mam zadanie na " parallelism" i musze poprawić zdanie :
Our coach is paid too much , obese , over forty , and a former champion wrestler.
wiem ż…e ostania część jest niepoprawna ale nie wiem przekształcić ż…eby było poprawnie . Moż…e ktoś wie??

[Gość]

Według mnie, zamiast "champion wrestler" lepiej brzmiałoby "wrestling champion", ale czy o to właśnie chodzi?

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