Czy to zdanie jest poprawne ( ang )

[Visitor]

Czy to zdanie jest poprawne:

'I hope You are enjoy while this script done all work instead of You. '
( Mam nadzieję ż…e dobrze się bawicie podczas gdy ten skrypt wykona za was całą robotę. )

??

[Visitor]

nie. ani po polsku, ani po angielsku.

[Visitor]

ojej...

[Visitor]

Jak będzie poprawnie?

[Visitor]

"I hope you have a good time while this script(?) does the whole work for you." Ale rzeczywiscie to polskie zdanie malo gramatyczne jest no i czas niebardzo jasny...

[Visitor]

albo tak:
"I hope that you enjoy yourself during this script is making whole work for you (/instead of you)

-[AGNES]

[Visitor]

Broń Boż…e nie brać pod uwagę propozycji [AGNES] - zdanie fatalnie skonstruowane!

W tak krótkim zdaniu: "during this script is making whole work" są aż… cztery błędy. Powinno być: "while this script does the whole work". Wykluczone jest również… w tym zdaniu "of you".

[Visitor]

I hope you have fun while the script does the whole work for you

[Visitor]

I hope you have a good time while the script does your whole work

[Visitor]

Jako native speaker... zgadzam sie ze zdanie po polsku nie brzmi najlepiej... na ile dobrze sie domyslam co autor chce napisac, wydaje mi sie ze najlepsze tlumaczenie jest...

I hope you are having a good time whilst the script does all your work ... ale to tez zalezy od tego co autor chcial powiedziec..

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