proszę o poprawę listu...

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proszę o poprawę listu...

Postautor: Carol90cia » 25 wrz 2008, 18:32

Mógłby mi ktoś pomóc w poprawieniu tego listu? Jest na prawdę badziewnie napisany dlatego prosze o poprawę..

Dear Alice.
Thanks for You letter. i'm sorry i havent written for such
a long time but i've been busy repairing in home.
my big news is that.. I'm in pregnancy. I know, thats great but
i don't know what i should do. You're my best friend so only you
know about it. i'm happy but i don't know how say it mine boyfirend,
Tadeusz. i love him, and he loves me but i'm afraid. What we doing now?
i've decided to spend the weekend in London. I hope you will
be in hause then. i will visit you and we will Seriously talk.

In my birthday Tadeusz Bought me a litlle dog. it was so sweet.
My birtday party was very coll. Everybody were satisfied.
oh, mum and dad are both well and send their regards.
Mark sends her love, My parents bought him a new computer and
he's very excited.

But how are you? How is your boyfriend? Are you still work in the
cinema? I hope that yes, because i loves watching films, you know.
I must stop now and go out with my dog. Say hello to your mum and
dad and give them my regards. Bye and for seeing.

Caroline.
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Re: proszę o poprawę listu...

Postautor: Gość » 29 wrz 2008, 8:31

In (For) my birthday Tadeusz bought me a little dog. It was so sweet.
My birthday party was very coll. Everybody were (was) satisfied.
By the way, mum and dad are both well and send their regards (greetings).
Mark sends you his love (??), My parents bought him a new computer and
he's very excited.

But how are you? How is your boyfriend? Are you still work in the
cinema (Do you still work in...)? I hope that yes (I hope you do), because I loves watching films, you know.
I must stop (finish) now and go out with my dog (take my dog for a walk). Say hello to your mum and dad and give them my regards. Bye and for seeing. (see you soon)

Caroline
Gość
 

Re: proszę o poprawę listu...

Postautor: Gość » 29 wrz 2008, 8:36

ucięło mi

Dear Alice.
Thanks for You letter. I'm sorry that I haven't written for such
a long time but I've been busy repairing (things at) home.
my big news is that.. I'm in pregnancy(I have a good news...I'm pregnant). I know, that it is great, but I don't know what should I do?. You're my best friend, so only you know about it. I'm happy but I don't know how say it mine (to tell my) boyfriend Tadeusz. I love him, and he loves me but I'm (still) afraid. What we (am I) doing now?
I've decided to spend the weekend in London. I hope you will
be in hause (at home) then (at that tome). I will visit you and we will (have a serious Seriously talk.
Gość
 

Re: proszę o poprawę listu...

Postautor: Gość » 29 wrz 2008, 16:13

Dear Alice.
Thanks for your letter. I'm sorry I haven't been writing for such
a long time but I've been busy repairing at home.
My big news is that.. I'm pregnant. I know, that's great but
I don't know what I should do. You're my best friend so only you
know about it. I'm happy but I don't know how to say it to my boyfirend,
Tadeusz. I love him, and he loves me but I'm afraid of telling him that. What should we do now?
I've decided to spend this weekend in London. I hope you will
be in the house then. I will visit you and we will talk seriously.

Tadeusz bought me a litlle dog for my birthday. It was so sweet.
My birthday party was very cool. Everybody were satisfied.
Oh, mum and dad are both well and are sending their regards.
Mark is sending his love as well. My parents bought him a new computer and he's very excited.

But how are you? How is your boyfriend? Are you still at work in the
cinema? I hope that you are because I love watching films, you know.
I must stop now and go out with my dog. Say hello to your mum and
dad and give them my regards. Bye for now and see you!.
Yours,
Caroline.


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Re: proszę o poprawę listu...

Postautor: Gość » 29 wrz 2008, 16:14

jeszcze jest literówka w wyrazie BOYFRIEND ... małgorzatka
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