Witam, mógłby ktoś sprawdzić, czy w tym speechu nie ma błędów?
Have you ever considered becoming a surgeon?
There are many advantages and disadvantages in doing this kind of job.
One of the main advantages of being a surgeon is treatment of patients with diseases because help people. Furthermore doctor earns a lot of money, because a lot of works. The advantage is frequent contact with patients.
However there are disadvantages in becoming a surgeon .
Firstly, little free time because has very office hours at the hospital. In addition this work is a very responsibility for human life.
In addition a surgeon must be resistant to the blood.
All things considered, becoming a surgeon is a good idea, as long as you are aware of the drawbacks.
I would like to become a doctor and help to people.
Z góry dziękuję za pomoc.