Proszę o sprawdzenie opisu;)

[Elivens]

Aby pomóc rozwiązać niektóre problemy społeczne, organizuje się akcje charytatywne.
Biorą w nich udział również… dzieci i młodzież…. Opisz tego typu akcję, która była
zorganizowana w Twojej szkole i w której wziąłeś/wzięłaś udział.





In my school we are organising a lot of charity action. In that kind of charity we collect the money for a poor and homeless people. That event was in march last year when our school master announced us of that situactiont. He said that we shoul paint some posters and display them in our city. With this way we could announc our plans to other citizen. We also prepared a painting and postcards for sail. We prepared a biscuits and cake for people whos want to give money for our charity. Lots of student and pupils give te money for them selves. We were walking on the town and collect the money from the people which walking on the street. We entered to the shops and encouraged to help us. In that action we collected a lots of money becouse our citizen were really generous. For this money we buyed many food and toys for the childre and we packet in for the box, which we send it for the most needing people. I this in that kind of event we can help a lot of people. I hope so that it wasn't our last charity event.

[aaa59]

In my school we organise a lot of charity events. In that kind of charity we collect money for ["people" jest rzeczownikiem niepoliczalnym, więc nie stawiamy "a"] poor and homeless people. That event [which event?; "that" sugeruje, ż…e jest to wydarzenie, o którym już… wcześniej wspomniałaś; trzeba to skonkretyzować: last event?] was in March [nazwy miesięcy w języku angielskim pisze się z duż…ej litery] last year when our school headmaster announced us of that situactiont [co zrobił dyrektor?]. He said that we should paint some posters and display them in our city. This way we could announce our plans to other citizens. We also prepared paintings and postcards for sale ["sail" oznacza "ż…eglować"]. We prepared ["biscuits" = liczba mnoga, przed liczbą mnogą nie stawiamy "a"] biscuits and cake for people who wanted [jeśli piszesz "prepared", czyli uż…ywasz czasu przeszłego, w dalszej cześci zdania również… musi być czas przeszły; w przeciwnym razie zdanie nie miałoby sensu] to give money to our charity. Lots of student and pupils give the money for themselves [nie bardzo wiem, co chciałaś tu powiedzieć; "wielu studentów i uczniów daje pieniądze dla siebie?"]. We were walking in the town and collecting money from the people we met [powtórzenie "walking", lepiej to skrócić]. We entered the shops and encouraged [brakuje jakiegoś dopełnienia; moż…e "encouraged the customers"?] to help us. During that event we collected a lot of money because the citizen of our town were really generous [ż…eby urozmaicić trochę składnię propnowałym zmienić drugą część zdania na stronę bierną: During that event we collected a lot of money thanks to the generosity of the citizens of our town]. For this money we bought a lot of ["food" jest rzeczownikiem niepoliczalnym, "many" uż…ywa się tylko przy policzalnych] food and toys for the children which we packed in boxes and sent to the people in need. Thanks to such events we can help others. I hope it was not the last one we organised.

[Elivens]

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