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[Visitor]

Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie poniż…szego teksu i poprawienie błędów(na pewno jakieś się znajdą):

Katyń

The latest film of Andrzej Wajda “Katyń" presents a manslaughter which have place in 1400 year in Poland. For director that of manslaughter was very important because his father was killed in that crime. In that movie are playing the best polish actors like: Artur Żmijewski and Maja Ostaszewska.

That movie is beginning in September of 1939 year when the red army is destroying the last symbols of Poland. Russians are taking polish highbrow to camps where nobody was know what is theirs future. One day the Russians come to take away in trains a highbrow to title village. When they approach to place they were killed by shoot in the back of the head, and bury in massive graves.

Music was the greatest attraction of this movie. The music was giving climate and flutter of emotions to the movie. Actors were playing very good and with passion they know what serious is that movie. Przemysław Nowakowski have write very good scenario which director have good use of it in that movie.

I think that movie is grate to somebody who wants to get to know about history of Poland and manslaughter in Katyń. I can recommend that movie also to all people who are interesting a little bit of history.

Z góry bardzo dziękuję wszystkim pomocnym...

[Danae21]

błędy merytoryczne potrzeba poprawić również… (nieliczne:) )

[Visitor]

(na pewno jakieś się znajdą)

Jakieś? ;o

"Katyń"

The latest Andrzej Wajda's film - “Katyń" presents a (manslaughter-dlaczego akurat to słówko?;>, to była planowana zbrodnia przecież… ;o, moż…e lepiej butchery?) which HAD place in (1400-a nie czasem w 1940?) year in Poland(na pewno w Polsce?...).

For director that of manslaughter was very important because his father was killed in that crime. - Zdanie bez sensu przez słówko manslaughter. I jak coś to bez OF

In that FILM(movie mówią amerykanie) are playing the best Polish(z duż…ej litery) actors SUCH AS Artur Żmijewski OR Maja Ostaszewska.

That FILM's PLOT beginS in September 1939 year when the Red Army destroyED the last symbols of Poland. Russians WERE taking Polish highbrowS to camps. THEY DIDN'T know what WILL HAPPEN TO THEM. One day, the Russians cAme. THEY tOOK highbrowS to (title village-nie lepiej po prostu Katyń?), in trains. When they REACH THIS place, HIGHBROWS were shOt in the back of the head, and burIED in MASS(chodzi chyba o masowe, a nie ma sywne?;]) graves.

Music was the greatest attraction of this FILM.

It was giving climate and flutter of emotions to the movie.(a tu co chciałeś powiedzieć?;])

Actors were playing very good and with passion. They knew HOW serious is THIS FILM. Przemysław Nowakowski wrOte (very good-powtarza się, moż…e GREAT?) (scenario lepiej SCRIPT) which WAS WELL USED by director in THIS FILM.

I think that THIS FILM is grEat FOR someONE who wants to get to know SOMETHING about Polish history and THE (manslaughter?) in Katyń. I can ALSO recommend THIS FILM to all people who are a little bit interestED IN history.

Osobiście pozmieniałbym kilka słówek i w ogóle napisał to inaczej ;d
Moż…e jeszcze jakieś błędy zostały, bo już… z deczka późno, ale zawsze to mniej...

[Danae21]

to manslaughter było ludobójstwem myślę (genocide)
....which TOOK place in 1940 (year po cóż…?).
this film was very important for the director because his father was murdered then.
The best Polish actors, such as M.O and A.Ż., play in it.
Actors were playing very well.
They knew how serious this film was.

Pisząc recenzję uż…yj jednego czasu (e.g.Present Simple) będzie to lepiej wyglądać.

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