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sprawdzenie błedów.

Postautor: teed » 01 cze 2010, 23:12

Witam proszę o sprawdzenie tego tekstu czy posiada jakieś błędy a jeż…eli tak to proszę o poprawienie:)
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Is is better to live in the village or in a town? Probably a lot of people ask the question. There are different opinions, some on the other. In my opinion it is better to live in the village,and my work justifies this statement. The first argument is that in the country is much less polluted air. There aren't so many cars and other means of transport, as in the city. In addition in the country there are more trees,which purify the air and produce oxygen. A second argument is the lack of noise. In the rural areas the population is smaller. In such a peaceful place people can relax and think mute,not about anything specific. Another argument is that the village is better interpersonal bonds.Of course there are many arguments against it. A small number of shops,cinemas,theatres and a smaller circle of friends. I think many people agree with me that life in the village is much more attractive than in the city.
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Re: sprawdzenie błedów.

Postautor: monimmi » 02 cze 2010, 0:50

teed pisze:
Is it better to live in a village or in a town? Probably a lot of people ask this question. There are different opinions, some on the other. In my opinion it is better to live in a village,and my work justifies this statement. The first argument is that the country has much less polluted air. There aren't so many cars and other means of transport as there are in the city. In addition in the country there are more trees,which purify the air and produce oxygen. The second argument is the lack of noise. In the rural areas the population is smaller. In such a peaceful place people can relax and think quietly,not about anything specific. Another argument is that the countryside is better interpersonal bonds, although the circle of friends might be smaller.Of course there are many arguments against living in the countryside as well. Villages have a smaller number of shops, cinemas, and theaters. I think many people agree with me that life in the village is much more attractive than in the city.


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