Angielski - Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawę

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Re: Angielski - Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawę

Postautor: Visitor » 29 lis 2005, 18:11

I got up about 7 o'clock and I went to bathroom. I took a shower, shaved and brushed my teeth. I ate breakfast.
Then I packed my books and about 7.30 I went to school. My lesson started at eight o'clock. At half past eleven I had a long break and I ate my second breakfast. I finished school at half past three. After school I went home and I had dinner.
I did my homework and I learned. About seven o'clock I met with my girlfriend. We went to the cinema. After date I came back home. I sat by computer and used the internet. About 23 o'clock I washed oneself and I went to bed.
That was my day


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Re: Angielski - Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawę

Postautor: Visitor » 30 lis 2005, 4:37

I got up at about 7 a.m. and went to the bathroom. I took a shower, shaved and brushed my teeth. I ate breakfast.
Then, I packed my books and at about 7.30 I left home for school. My lessons started at eight o'clock sharp. At half past eleven I had a long break and I ate my lunch. I finished school at half past three and went straight home to have dinner.
I did my homework and studied. I met my girlfriend at about seven p.m. We went to the cinema. After I had got back home from the date I sat at the computer to surf the Internet. I bathed at about 11 p.m and then went to bed.
That was my day.
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Re: Angielski - Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawę

Postautor: Visitor » 30 lis 2005, 7:05

Wielkie dzięki.

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Re: Angielski - Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawę

Postautor: Visitor » 30 lis 2005, 11:50

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