Czy ktos mógłby zerknąć czy to dobrze napisane.

[inspire]

Witam serdecznie!

Ponizszy tekst potrzebuje do CV. Nie mam pojecia czy jest napisany poprawnie. Bardzo prosze o korekte.

Netwatch provided the community easy and affordable access to the internet,
full access to email, WWW, FTP, Usenet and other Internet applications.
Offered with the ability to access the Internet, enjoy a cup of coffee, and
share Internet experiences in a comfortable environment.

[besthost]

To tylko moja sugestia.

'Offered with' nasuwa, ze Netwatch jest dostarczany ze zdolnością dostępu do internetu, itd. , a pewnie chodzi o to, ze ja umozliwia.
Polecam pozbycie się 'with'.

[Krzysztof B]

Besthost ma rację.

Netwatch provided the community with easy and affordable access to the internet, full access to email, WWW, FTP, Usenet and other internet applications.
It offered the ability to access the internet, enjoy a cup of coffee, and share internet experiences in a comfortable environment.

Co jest WWW? Jeśli internet to już… jest napisane.

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